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Thread: to all my constituants

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    to all my constituants

    dropped replys to
    skiddz
    aisle 5 and some other dudes shit
    and jimmyripper


    exempt from contempt i rip souls and bodies get condensed
    break ya defence, my rhymes take lives with deadly content
    let me vent, im hell sent with the rawest of purpose
    through my exertions ill bring more heat like *c to f* conversions
    me and my insurgents,will tear you of your physical
    with the residual occurence of these abominable rituals
    im phenominal and somewhat biblical, ancient in many ways
    bring knowledge like a college and smile whenever my mind spray
    my brain devestates, when i contemplate i seem to desecrate
    with intentions intent on breaking down all that you create
    mc's dissipate, im giving words a new meaning of danger
    they make you holy and weak like baby jesus in the manger
    im quick to anger, lone ranger on the prowl
    contagiously ill, yall feel me in your bowels
    my language foul, a dark dialect of this beast rhythm
    styles shine in different lights like reflections of a prism
    make incisions in times fabric, causes mental static
    an erratic savage live and breathe of the tragic
    emotions that your emotin', feral and potent
    hack into your body, just to glimpse all the components
    but i've always been there, you've always known it
    im you, your me, your devotions set free
    truth bears witness your sacred alimony
    to expunge all the guild, let loose with your soul
    and let splitsoul get the wheel under his controll


    oh yea... fooled ya, yall thought it was gonna be serious....
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    good to see you still got your flair for attention grabing and percise skillz.....you came ll in here with wordplay and twisting the subject matter....all and all this was illness all the way.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    I was definately feelin the flow in this piece some real hot internals but i did feel the content was lacking any real thickness. The rhyme scheme was very nice very smooth as far as a repetitive rhythm to it. overall this was a decent read

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    Yeah i agree this was a pretty good piece here....enjoyed the read...flow in this was real good, stayed on point through out it and didnt really get off....you had some good internals in this, liked that...vocab was pretty nice in here too...overall good piece..keep at it.

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    it was a ight piece flow and vocab was ight wordplay ok punches ight multi's ok over all 6.9/10

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