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June 8th, 2025, 02:39 AM
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Cygnus X1
I'm more mannered eyes lit with low gamma clips but no camera switch then do damage..
I'm manic conscript wit that few handle, step LV grays drip like mute granite.
I'm you canon watch every rule vanish. Like Bruce Banner while his moods panning.
This style they all bite like a huge sandwich.
Matter fact I'm just another hatter that raps.
Haber to dash even when I'm Luke warm tell ya Anakins back!
Looking for ammo to rack I'm the prince lord, leaving animal tracks.
Put my hand across your face like a mechanical jack (Psshh)
I'm on fire like a man you should pat what I've compiled could take America back.
I'm what comparisons lack.
Hope your character matches
All those areas actually.
she's still hoping she gon marry an athlete.
I Just buried the last me.
Intrinsic all these rhymes, like hindenburg with this iron.
Too windy here but I'm flying, I engineer what I'm writing.
So in the field all Heisman. so quick to feel what your vibin.
Like Happy Gilmore with the driver, If there's peace ill find it.
Diamonds in the rough my eyes lids stuck from your kindness.
Don't mean much but don't try m, like a piece of junk that seems so shiny.
Like helium I'm rising. Like a key to them I'm winding.
Like Media(meteor) so finite.
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June 8th, 2025, 02:25 PM
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Re: Cygnus X1
Great rhyme scheme on this, and the metaphors were on point as well. I appreciated the style switching up a few times as the piece went on. You're clearly new to site, but not to the game, or you're posting under an alias.
There's a few people doing that lately.
You hit a bullseye with this brag piece. Keep posting.
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Newbie
Re: Cygnus X1
Hey, thanks for reading I see you are also new to this site and now wonder if you are an alias.
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