RW WK2: Virbius vs KnoXville (Open for feedback)

[Bag Mandela]

Wk2: Gay Bars Battle

Bars due Thursday 24th

Public voting closes Saturday 26th

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Overall public vote = 1 vote

MV’s vote = 1 vote

Bags vote = 1 vote

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This themed round requires that you disrespect your opponent from a homosexual point of view. As a basic example:



You cheated with my boyfriend, he said your cock is puny, half of mine,

When he jerked you off he had to use the illuminati sign




Some of you may feel uncomfortable, some of you may relish the challenge & some of you have been on a spree of writing like mighty morphin faggot rangers for years so this should come naturally to you.

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Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.

Rebuttals, late drops & no shows are an instant loss.

(1 x 24hr extension per person for the whole event)

@Virbius @Knoxville

[Virbius]

Bend over bitch

[Virbius]

This bitch my crack whore, I’ll leave his ass sore and smacked raw,
Suck cocks. Fuck KnoX, I’mma break-in his back door.
I’ll fuck his asshole with my twenty inch dick, hmm, that’s a stretch…
I’m gonna dump his body, first he getting shagged to death…
If I had to guess, that explains this faggot’s name as the facts suggest,
KnoX… he must’ve known that he was gonna finish with a massive ex.

Dude said he’d make love to Rone and look how much respect Pat got.
You were like fuck this gay shit and pulled out. that’s a backshot.
Ay, yo, you go to tap dance class in your little sequined frocks…
You open wide and I cum inside at like three o’clock…
Banged hard twice after tap and then I hit it again, shit you’re seeming shocked,
Oh sorry babe silly me forgot, I’ve just given away our secret KnoX.

[KnoXville.]

You Gay as fuckkkkk

Winner : Virbius

[Bag Mandela]

Virb bodied this verse, nameflips all fire, massive ex was particularly brilliant, backshots bar was dope, gonna leave this one open for feedback until next rounds good to go.

[Slayerr.]

Massive ex was nice, solid rhyme scheme and flow throughout and really bought into this weeks theme good drop

[Spree]

Lmfao virb a bad man!

[MV]

goddamn Virb went crazy this round. im not seeing enough about how crazy that first bar was. violently gay.

[TheShaman]

I read this verse and figured apparently it was 12 bars this time. Really dope execution.

[Virbius]

Shaman, yeah KnoX had already said he wasn’t competing in this round, so I knew I could post extra bars without fairness being a factor. I wrote double to make up for KnoX not writing any, so Bag still gets to enjoy the same net total of gay bars for his money. lol.

Interesting most of you liked the massive Ex part most, tbh I thought that one was a bit of a reach and not worth the four lines I had to spend on setting it up. I kind of agree with MV, I was most pleased with the opening bar name flip.

Thanks all for the feedback, nice to hear.

No problem with this week’s theme. I’m straight but the gays are cool, and, like, most of the stuff I write about in these battles is made up anyway. Not keen on doing either, but if I had to choose I’d sooner bugger KnoX than cannibalistically consume Unfuk’s corpse like I said I was gonna do last round. Gross.

[KnoXville.]

Seems like you got a real enjoyment reading that verse calm your nipples.

[Virbius]

Psst everyone stop it, you’re making KnoX jealous.

Lmfao virb a bad man!

shhh bro he’s right there