RW Wk1 - mal diction vs KnoXville (Knox Wins)

[Bag Mandela]

Ransom Writers Week 1 - Regular 6 Line Battle

6 lines each (doesn’t have to be set up-punch x3, you have creative freedom)

Bars due Tuesday 15th Oct
Public voting closes Wednesday 16th Oct

-Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.
-State your accent in this first round then we’re good for the rest of the tourney.


2 impartial judges + public vote will decide the winner
MV’s vote = 1 vote
Bag's vote = 1 vote
Overall public vote = 1 vote
(Rebuttals, late drops & no shows are an instant loss)


@mal diction @Knoxville

[mal diction]

I said it before... i'm from a small town called Knox Ville
and won't stop still, cause after i asketh and seeketh i'm gone knock Ville
dude i got strong reach.. you're barkin’ up the wrong tree
defeat you on green earth and bring you back.. to kill you again on dawn's sea
for eyes you need a prescription, nobody's seeing the cat diction
so who you dissin’? that’s wishin.. he's only good in the net.. call it catfishing

[MV]

@Knoxville
looking forward to your drop tonight.
there is also a new rule for 24hr extensions

[KnoXville.]

@Knoxville
looking forward to your drop tonight.
there is also a new rule for 24hr extensions

Sure I’ll take that.

[KnoXville.]

Been Busy I’ll key Up something.

3-17 ya careers been tarnished & trained to receive Dents,
You’ve been here since 2014 & established yourself being a punching bag ever since.

I’m sure with your taste of clothing gotta make these hoes stutter More,
whenever bitches see what Malware’s, iinstantly Frys up all of they MotherBoards.

Where I’m from we ignite Gunners quick, the newest kicks proved u wasn’t running shit,
should be ashamed of yourself for being here this long and still putting up wit that type of punishment.

[FaQEyeReddit]

Hmm two different styles here.. mal for me is always hard to judge because he goes deep pause but he goes deep with his disses but at the same time I don’t feel that heavy handed punch but this was decent drop

Knox also has a decent drop here I feel like the motherboard ish was eh but I think id be fair in voting Knox here if I put the catfish line and Knox finisher of getting whipped for years id go with the later. I’ll vote Knox this time hopefully nothing flew over my head man.. also you guys can explain bars in this tournament

[HEK TEAFY]

I'm liking Knox last bar the most so ima


MVGT=KNOX

Good Battle

[Bag Mandela]

Mal's verse was written more coherently, almost eloquent in places, the just to kill you again on dawn's sea line had something about it that's hard to put your finger on, dope though, just a shame the rest was missing a more solid punch & wordplay.

Knox started off super basic, obviously rushing to beat the deadline which is fair enough. The Malware wordplay could've been executed a little better but in a rush I suppose the metaphor of frying their motherboards isn't bad. Closer was aight.

If Mal can infuse more wordplay, nameflips, etc into his style he can be a problem in this tourney, but was just lacking slightly in this round. Got to give it to Knox but just an edge.

[MV]

i actually read this battle starting with Knox then went to mal. last bar from knox was nice, the rest written nice but just jabbing. Mal is a dope writer i think your punches are far to abstract.

v/Knox