WK28: FAQ (1-3) vs Knoxville (0-0) (KNOX WINS)

[miracle]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@FaQEyeReddit
@KnoXville.

[FaQEyeReddit]

Check

[FaQEyeReddit]

“*The opening scene* , the infamous shinobi known as FaQeyereddit, stands battle ready hand on his katana wind blowing his hair.”


Bar:

I taught this jackass how to get a girl, I explained he gotta get his hands dirty but not that exact perception…
I said talk dirty not have bad breath, how’d he make that connection, atp you just digging ya own grave running back to ya ex-tract infections..

[KnoXville.]

Check

[KnoXville.]

I swear once I’m done looting, it’s Fuck Your Speech this punks Losing,
The way this Bullet’ll ‘pierce his ear off from the talk’ will remind you of the trump shooting.

[Unfukwitable]

One bar was very long drawn and theatrical I feel like if you channel compacting that creativity into a short two line bar u would come up with more creative ways to say what you’re tryna say, Current event trump bar was cool nothing to crazy in my opinion but enough to edge it for me.

V/KNOX

[Slayerr.]

FAQ your bar was a bit wordy this week try to keep it short and sweet. Knox with a current punch, second best trump flip of the week!
V/knox

[Bag Mandela]

Liked the ex-tract wordplay from FaQ, heard it done before but was still decent. Shame about the bar length, there were multis to keep the flow going & hold it together but it was a little too verbose.

Knoxville had the "fuck your speech" reference in the set up which was a nice touch. Wasn't feeling the wording of the punch, specifically "pierce his ear off from the talk", but it landed nonetheless. FaQ might've gotten this with a shorter & more-to-the-point 1-2 but got to edge it to Knox.

Vote Knox

[MV]

v/Knox
knox had a cleaner punch . Faq had a little two much going on. i feel if Faq would focus on one wp at a time and level up from there he definitely would pack more fire.

[miracle]

Knox wins