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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
1 bar from each battler
@FaQEyeReddit
@mv
@Lady Poet
line your bodies up in a hearse, the dumbest then the stupidest or is the order reversed?
no matter how low Eye queue is, he gonna have to make room because Lady's first
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As I look for the right angles to shoot these co-vid shots, I disseminate quick jabs at MV cuz I C-U-R-E-Z to eliminate..
but lady it’s just that time of the month you’ll get put up-in’a-ceiling from addick when my pen a trait.
Last edited by FaQEyeReddit; June 26th, 2024 at 06:47 PM
FAQ - pronounced fack…
Eye or E.Y.E - divination (seek knowledge using computers)
Reddit- A web “sight” with frequent asked and answered questions.
it should read Fa, Q, I read it for kicks
Check
In this punchline battle, you're about to meet your fate,
I'll leave you both destroyed and in a sorry State.
Last edited by Lady Poet; June 26th, 2024 at 10:41 PM
Yo. MV was actually fire. And that's not just because the quality of his opponents gave him more freedom to type whatever and still win. Great nameflips. Lady was a distant second.
v-MV
When MV’s on form with these intricate bars including multiple interrelated wordplay elements he’s one of the best on the site. FAQ’s bar had some creative elements but not as smooth as MV’s, I appreciate the density of the wordplay but it was kind of laborious to unpack. I like Lady’s attitude but if there were wordplay elements in her bar they went over my head.
Vote- MV
Lady was very much to the point regarding her intentions but lacked any wordplay or otherwise figurative language to give her a chance.
FaQ - the CUREZ idea was creative, props, but when it's this close I gotta criticise it being a little bit forced with the misspelling IE Z rather than S. Lady bar was dope, just wish you hadn't used "pen a trait" because it's been used almost as much as da-feet bars. Couple of tweaks you could've got this.
MV - Eye queue, ladies first, the bar was doooope. I've been a prick & criticised everyone else so would say I'd have liked a more multisyllabic rhyme scheme but tbh it really wasn't necessary on this occasion. Top bollocks geezer.
Vote MV
Liked mvs bar the most, clever concept for sure.
Lady - to the point yea but like mentioned no complexity, metaphors or word play to make the punch harder
FahQ - had a dope concept man, the curez shit was nice tied in with covid shit, it works with text I see you're adapting more... the finisher with the bar for lady didn't hit as hard and I kinda wish there was a way they were both tied in together
Vote - MV
Feel like MV came with a punch that tied both opponents into it smoothly the punch was fire and so was the imagery, I felt lady kept it very basic and didn’t incorporate anything creative to the concept and I feel like FaQue had a concept there but the wording took away from what he was trying to do imo, props to all.
v/MV
MV wins
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