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@brokenhalo
@Slayerr.
In for 10
ok 10 it is
Yo, gather 'round, it's time to witness a fall, I'm sick of it all.
Slayer, you're about to hit a brick wall, I'm owning the night while you're sitting on your bed,
smoking the pipe. Holes in your pants, crust covers both of your eyes, haven't slept for days,
it's okay, even his parents hope that he dies. By the dawn, I'll show you the light when it's over,
you'll know the true meaning of fright like when you used to drink at the pub then go home and start beating your wife
until she left all alone pleading in spite. Who got me battling this babbling man living a meaningless life?
I'm cold-blooded like a vampire bleeding in ice. I'm the type that will creep into your window deep in the night,
smother you with a pillow, this faggot got no reason to fight. In the morning, your kids will scream at the sight
of me standing over your corpse cleaning the knife.
Post has been edited down to ten lines @brokenhalo ten lines means ten lines -mir
Last edited by miracle; February 18th, 2024 at 08:21 PM
Ur punching above ur weight g, mismatched u with the best
I’ll slice out ur tounge n send u back to NC quicker than u can say no contest
Ur my butler, n this Brit kid is addicted to hot drinks fanatically
I’m thirsty, but I didn’t mean ur wife when I said bring this manatee
Ur a joke or so ur folks say, I’ll snap this dweeb leave him dead for rights
Coz the last time I broke hay his mum didn’t have a bed for the night
You’re not built to fight, ur angles are off see, n punches are pitter patter
Armed w/ concepts so old Volkanovski last saw them when he was a whippersnapper
Your verse is garbage. ur retarded n I hit you hardest black out
Coz I ain’t describing the tune in your audio when I lay you flat out
winner slayyerr
broken dropped like 26lines lol
but it aint written write 4it 2 hit
he needs to work on rewording his lines to b e direct
slay did enough to get this win
i liked every bar in slays verse except the 1st one
the next four all hit 4me good verse
Ur my butler, n this Brit kid is addicted to hot drinks fanatically
I’m thirsty, but I didn’t mean ur wife when I said bring this manatee
Ur a joke or so ur folks say, I’ll snap this dweeb leave him dead for rights
Coz the last time I broke hay his mum didn’t have a bed for the night
BH that was one big run on sentense. you have to split that up into some lines and punches. i couldnt find anything that landed imho
v/Slayerr
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Slayer wins. Manatee been done but still better.. BH was just.. wtv
I'm cold-blooded like a vampire bleeding in ice. I'm the type that will creep into your window deep in the night,
smother you with a pillow, this faggot got no reason to fight. In the morning, your kids will scream at the sight
of me standing over your corpse cleaning the knife.
VS
slay, dude basically handed he battle to you... all you had to do was beat with the play on words... Hay, your start was a rocky one; you didnt do anything till the endUr my butler, n this Brit kid is addicted to hot drinks fanatically
I’m thirsty, but I didn’t mean ur wife when I said bring this manatee
Ur a joke or so ur folks say, I’ll snap this dweeb leave him dead for rights
Coz the last time I broke hay his mum didn’t have a bed for the night
v-BH
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
I'm cold-blooded like a vampire bleeding in ice. I'm the type that will creep into your window deep in the night,
smother you with a pillow, this faggot got no reason to fight. In the morning, your kids will scream at the sight
of me standing over your corpse cleaning the knife.
^this was actually alright.. if u learn how to setup and deliver a punch I think ur gonna get the hang of this…
Ur my butler, n this Brit kid is addicted to hot drinks fanatically
I’m thirsty, but I didn’t mean ur wife when I said bring this manatee
You’re not built to fight, ur angles are off see, n punches are pitter patter
Armed w/ concepts so old Volkanovski last saw them when he was a whippersnapper
^enough for the win. Wasn’t your best work but setup and punches were there
VOTE SLAY
Brokenhalo- Flowed really cool. Cool narration, visuals. But not the best way to approach a short 10 line battle. As a set up/filler in like a 3min accapella round? Yeah. But in a text battle that leaves you with one cool visually driven angle vs someone who's bring 5-6 punches.
Slayerr - No contest was mild. Manatee was funny. Broke hay was humorous as well. Volk was funny but light. Closer was mild.
Overall, easy call. Slayerr by a comfy margin. Much more well rounded verse.
Vote - Slayerr
Slayer had some jokes (broke hay, manatee) those were the standouts. BH verse read like a topical mixed w/ a battle verse. Good attempt but needs work.
V. Slayer
Slay wins 6-1
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