WK07: (5-3) MV vs. (1-0) Plot (MV Wins)

[Wuxia]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


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@MV
@Plot

[Plot]

Check

[MV]

im loaded

[Wuxia]

MV's good to go. He sent his bar in.

[Plot]

Your last battle? Face probably still looks like the bottom of Allen's Reeboks.
Shhiiit..
He didn't just kick the demon, it was a demonstration in how to detox.

[Wuxia]

@MV

7.62s left ur body in ambiguity, u'll flatline before i ever come under scrutiny
trust me, no one can fill in the holes in ya Plot...fast enough to reestablish continuity

[Wuxia]

We had 2 different styles here that clashed rather well. Plot went the personal direction, which gets me interested in a battle right from the get-go. I enjoyed everything about the setup and the build, but the punchline itself wasn't all that satisfying for me as far as the payoff. "it was a demonstration in how to detox" and "kick the demon" didn't give me the payoff the setup was leading me into. It just wasn't that impactful. MV had a dope nameflip, with a more impactful punchline to close the bar out. The styles were different, but the level of creativity was very similar to one another. I enjoyed that aspect of this battle.

v-MV

[Slayerr.]

Nice battle here I enjoyed both bars. Plot has a nice concept and enjoyed the flip although felt it was worded in a clowning sort of vibe which I usually fuck with more in audio but in text I think I prefer a more harsh and direct ending. I liked MVs thought the restablishing continuity and plot holes was a creative approach. My only gripe with it is I don’t really see where filling the holes in for someone that’s been shot is ever a thing but that’s a minor gripe haha.

Overall I enjoyed both but gonna give it to MV I think his flip was more creative
v/MV

[King]

Fucking love plots idea. As worded, ur almost kind of complimenting MV by calling him a demon imo which does take away from the sting of the bar. Ending could have used some more work also. Great concept though, never seen a kick the demon flip

MV, less creative but better execution. Definitely more harsh as well, which I generally tend to lean towards. I do think u could have ended a little cleaner but I fuck with it.

Vote MV. Good battle fellas

[Smog]

I felt plots read smoother, but lacked a little sting. I’m assuming MV is or was the demon? Overall tho it was a slick bar imo. MV I though was creative as well just kinda enjoyed the top to botto
Read little more, thought it landed harder. Dope read from both but

Mvgt MV

[Bahriman]

This a tough one i fuck with plots bar because of the personal and he was straight to the point. But MV’s bar was dope to with the difference style…

Ill brb

[B Dot LESNAR]

MV was far more compelling than Plot here. Even though Plot was decent, I have MV in an obvious pick.

[Muhyeob]

MV was far more compelling than Plot here. Even though Plot was decent, I have MV in an obvious pick.

I didn't like Plot's thing at all. Like kicking the demon okay. MV was tough to understand at first but Preston explained to me what continuity was and that made it easier for me to vote for MV.

[Wuxia]

6-0 MV wins