Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
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@Bag Mandela @R!canTheoryz
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Bag Mandela @R!canTheoryz
Ready.
@Bag Mandela @R!canTheoryz
Bars due tonight
Rican blood stains my blade, smeared with thick fluid,
It's nuthin to poke holes in Theory, n dis prove it
You in a no fly zone. CNT sleep acting like u Struggling at night,
& just know if there’s anything extra Bags, The price charges double for ya life.
Both bars are solid- I think Bags concept was a little more fleshed-out and connected harder for me. Theory bar was cool, liked the charge bag concept but I thought it could’ve ended with a harder swing. Good battle. V/Bag
I got Bags here, but to me it's very close.
His is short & sweet, good phonetics and wordplay/imagery.
I DID really like Rican here, AND I thought his punchline regarding the extra bags charge WAS more difficult/&creative than Bag's simple-but-powerfully/concise 1-2.
But when it's so close I have to nitpick the execution of the line itself, I didn't think it was "as perfect" syllabically as Bags', or Rican's top line even...
That's all I got: V/Bags by just a bit -
Rican: Certainly not bad but your opponent's exactness made the difference...not trying to punish u for a more difficult multi...just have to call it, so I did.
&REALLY GREAT
IF these guys are the old Bags & Rican from Nc's.
Stay up, GL next wk
Vote - Bags
Both had solid bars. I have Bag edging it by a hair, based on better flow & a slight edge in terms of execution.
I’ve got Bag here, I enjoyed both lines to an extent but felt Bag worded his concept better than R!can managed to his.
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This was a fun one. I liked both concepts. I feel like Bags flowed alil better. Didn’t like the way Rican rhymed his. That was my only issue w/ the bar. I have Bags w/ the edge
V/Bags
I believe bags was pretty much direct and straightforward with his concept. R!can didnt do bad either but extra bag concept needed a bit more sting to it
np vs np I got bag
v/Bags
Nice showing fellas. this one came down to wording to my preference. i think Bags was a cleaner with he wording making his punch feel a bit more effective.
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That’s not the same bags from NC, but yes I am him. LolOriginally Posted by Pharaohs Army
Good Battle Bags.
solid battle, I think both had some cool concepts but it came down mostly to wording here. I feel that Ricans bar had a bit more fluff than it needed. Didn't seem to land properly to me. Bag's flowed a bit better though still had some wording issue but nothing to crazy.
v/bags
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