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@Blue Bayou @Slayerr.
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Blue Bayou @Slayerr.
WOOOOOOOOOOOO
"Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic
Thinks he’s getting back on the horse, loses 3 then draws me what a fable
Blue finding a win is needle in a haystack, when he’s the worst writer on the stable
don't look surprised. rookie, I will deliver
nobody even wanted Uterus pond. pussy, cry me a river
"Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic
Vote Blue
Uterus pond was pretty dope and well worded. Slayer had the light personal, and thematic tie ins, but the pay off just wasnt there with "worst in the stable'.
Vote -Blue
Slayer had a good concept idk where the sting factor came in tho?
Maybe I’m missing something wording I guess? Blue cool bar I enjoyed the play.
didn't enjoy either but blue had cool wp.. a uterus pond? come on tho... loool v/ blue
other guy didnt like the connections.
vote blue that wordplay was better than barcs career in txt
Slayerr. was leading up to the end well & I get the link with the stable, horse etc scheme, I think it's the "he's the worst writer on the stable" that doesn't feel like a cutting insult.
Was expecting Blue to be with slayers mum in a poker room with the noises being made when he poker "oom", glad you're off the reachy homonym shit. Laughed at "uterus pond" but the follow up "pussy, cry me a river" was smooth. Rated this a lot, original as well, nicely done.
Vote Blue
Props to both. I loved the needle in the Haystack part and the personal within the set-up but Blue had a much better Wordplay idea this week and sounded a little harsher so MVGT Blue Bayou
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BLUE
Cool flip on Cotics infamous punch.
Slayerr didnt make his references connect for the punch, there was lots goin on but didnt get there in the end.
Plottin your demise.
v/Blue
im going with blue on this one. Slayerr your bar connected but I didn't have enough slap in it bro.good concept good idea it was just I missing je ne sais quoi. Uterus Pond is questionable and hilarious at the same time.....
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