yoooo...
CΛVEMENAxe
I'm 2-2 Kill....
Might do time for this killing, this'll be a body and I don't even feel bad for you
But I can also signal from a cell, he won't know what happened till his neck synapsin' too
CΛVEMENAxe
brought a knife to a fistfight.. they'll scrape this bum off the lobby
OCD breakfast eaters; he Comb-a-Toast & I'll leave a trail of breadcrumbs to the body
Equal points on the wordplay & how well it worked in the bar, set ups of a similar standard & it came down to the positioning of the impactful elements. It hits harder for me when the reveal / trigger moment is as close to the end of the bar as possible. I think this was slightly moreso the case with Axe's bar whereas Exalted's best part was set further back.
Vote Axe
i see what Axe was aiming for but it just didnt work ... and Exalted's was too wordy ... so i'm going to have to go with Axe
Vote Axe
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
Exalted
Wordings weird and coulda sent up the coma part better but I like it more than synapsin too, cant make that work.
Plottin your demise.
Gone at “comb a toast” nah bro not this week man. I got Axe taking this
Wordplay was fucking bonkers on both ends boys great job
Very close but since the rest of the site is leading Axe I'll vote for him as well so as to not stand out but Comb A Toast was equal flames
Vote axe
"Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic
i got axe.. both were pretty good but synapsis hit harder for me. comb a toast was good too but something in the execution was a bit off.
Vote Axe
Clean jab, well executed. Ex had a cool concept, just needed to be set up better and with out the meh comatoast tie in.
Axe wins