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    Mighty God

    God brought me with care
    He lift my spirit in the air
    I'm so blessed to have God
    He save me even when something's is odd
    He love me dearly
    He always protect me
    He's so wise
    He give good advise
    He gave me everything I need to succeed

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    Re: Mighty God

    Hello Vixen, nice to see you're still dropping work.
    I think you put some emotion and effort into this and it shows how much you
    appreciate the higher forces in this world.
    Very literal, so clear its crystal.
    Sometimes when things are written out so literally they can sound a bit abrupt
    so maybe toy with the idea of a little bit of descriptive imagery
    or figurative language (explaining things in a non-literal or non-traditional way).



    Keep that pen moving Vixen
    Good job

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    Re: Mighty God

    Hello Emily, Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.

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