5 bars
Due Friday night
Bomb Bard
Damohohoh
5 bars
Due Friday night
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I impose with speed
Exceeding bombard smoking weed
I customise diets for this vegetarian
I give him fresh beef when it’s served like a true American
Basic language grades here’s a lesson
Go study questions class is in session
Breakfast time his drinking soda
like eating junk i'll lead his life to being over
i'm valuable like assets
he is financial crisis bank debts
I'll have my verse tonight forgot bout this
Damnohoh
Kill U in a knife fight.... so stop it U joke
Don't even think to raise a blade, or I'll have one lodged in your throat
You fuckin faggot... no one cares how this lame work
Leave you W/more broken bones from the Net like Gordon Hayward
Plus Ur love a huge slut.... for my dick she work her ass off
This a dark day to the point I gotta leave a light on for U out side while I'm giving her back shots
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DamOhOhOh
I customise diets for this vegetarian
I give him fresh beef when it’s served like a true American
Weak line, but it was the most intelligent/hard hitting one you had. I feel like you are still trying to grasp writing, which is fine, but try to be more direct with your opponent. Try to come a little more complex as well, as you will quickly find out, text battles are more or less "poetry-diss" battles. Come wordier. Better vocabulary. More direct punchlines.
Bomb Bard
You fuckin faggot... no one cares how this lame work
Leave you W/more broken bones from the Net like Gordon Hayward
Some wittiness there. Your other four actual bars were much stronger than your opponents, though I have to comment and say, your last bar is horribly stretched. You simply came more direct with your lines.
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v/ bomb
dam's bars are too short and more written in poetry format.
bomb's are structured better. nothing crazy, but easy W
Krucial Thirteen
fuck votes these dudes are jokes ill kill them and there dead bodies will get poked by some lil kids these sukkas ain wit the shit why do you even try to spit it makes me wanna open a can n beat that bitch or whoop that trick this ain no hustle n flow but if u try to go ludachris youll get stompped in this bitch smokin on a king size boout to give my bitch a king size eyes never tell lies i keep mine on the prize lyrics keepin you mesmerized when i pop off i give my bitch a sty in her eye ya me n her went n got marry either way im still ripe like a berry ready for the pickin ya bitch wanna give me a lickin she a bop n i ain given a shit-n im after these riches you ain hard you trippin you a kitten with mittens so much so you ain gotta see me in person to know i lyrically gifted and if we ever kicked it youd know i glisten im shinin grindin never two timin but always multiplin my dividends and i do it by myself so i wont divide it in the end.
fuck votes these dudes are jokes ill kill them and they dead bodies will get poked by some lil kids
these sukkas ain wit the shit why do you even try to spit?
makes me wanna open a can n beat that bitch or whoop that trick
this ain no hustle n flow but if u try to go ludacris you'll get stomped in this bitch
smokin on a king size bout to give my bitch a king size eyes never tell lies
I keep mine on the prize lyrics keepin you mesmerized
when I pop off I give my bitch a sty in her eye
Ya me n her went n got marry either way im still ripe like a berry
ready for the pickin ya bitch wanna give me a lickin
she a bop n I ain given a shit-n im after these riches you ain hard you trippin
you a kitten with mittens so much so you ain gotta see me in person to know I'm lyrically gifted
and if we ever kicked it you'd know i glisten
im shinin, grindin, never two timin but always multipylin my dividends and I do it by myself so I wont divide it in the end.
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Damn
I impose with speed
Exceeding bombard smoking weed
I customise diets for this vegetarian
I give him fresh beef when it’s served like a true American
Basic language grades here’s a lesson
Go study questions class is in session
Breakfast time his drinking soda
like eating junk i'll lead his life to being over
i'm valuable like assets
he is financial crisis bank debts
I felt this whole drop here gave me an audio battle vibe it was simple punches not to much creativity as it would be in a text battle formatted verse. The beef line was ok. U have to come more creatively in text battles so lines stand out use metaphores wordplays nameplays if u cant some personals that include humor factor.
Bomb
Leave you W/more broken bones from the Net like Gordon Hayward
Nice metaphorical comparison
Plus Ur love a huge slut.... for my dick she work her ass off
This a dark day to the point I gotta leave a light on for U out side while I'm giving her back shots
Lmao
Bomb is just more knowledgable in the text format he took this comfortably
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im w bomb. Dam your verse sounds like a bunch of statements rather than punches, so work on being more direct and really hurting the mans feelings! Not sure if your first language is english cos ive seen you write "his" instead of "he's" in multiple battles, but then you seem to be coherent in other areas lmao. nice job bomb that last bar was like watching the last jedi. I thought it was about to end but it just kept going. other than that you came correct.
v/ bomb