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Don’t bring a knife to this gun fight, I'd beat u brawlin or spinnin shots
I aint boastin iLL, when I post to kill...it aint cause a Mag gave me winnin odds!
Fight me and leave jawless, wit that Scripture a bomb at this Box office
Critics stand denying, me vs dandelion…not that weed see the head pop off it!
At Lunch wit your Family guy, wifey’ll gag on this Peter n waste all that
I know I better like the Stewie try, or ima serve the hoe PBnJ w/a Baseball bat!
Script u get ya first whippin then go feelin yaself, aint nobody fearin iLL
U can drive thru tootin ya own horn, after I smash ya face in the steerin wheel!
Don’t be giving the web addresses, I travel thru States and across lines
Dots com on nerd shit, but if u think disconnect wit Net- i’LL put in work offline!
Dont no show shine me
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Gradually improving. Not a bad verse, bud. Definitely more coherent.Originally Posted by Networth
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Re: WK 4:Networth(1-2) Vs Ill scripturez(0-0)
nice intro I guess? Not sure why you'd put all this shi in a verse
Don’t bring a knife to this gun fight, I'd beat u brawlin or spinnin shots
I aint boastin iLL, when I post to kill...it aint cause a Mag gave me winnin odds!
these kinds of punches don't really hit hard yo, it ain't you it's the punch
Fight me and leave jawless, wit that Scripture a bomb at this Box office
Critics stand denying, me vs dandelion…not that weed see the head pop off it!
hmm not sure how to feel about this, maybe better wording would have helped
At Lunch wit your Family guy, wifey’ll gag on this Peter n waste all that
I know I better like the Stewie try, or ima serve the hoe PBnJ w/a Baseball bat!
cringe man....this is really forced and you're trying to do way too much here
Script u get ya first whippin then go feelin yaself, aint nobody fearin iLL
U can drive thru tootin ya own horn, after I smash ya face in the steerin wheel!
decent
Don’t be giving the web addresses, I travel thru States and across lines
Dots com on nerd shit, but if u think disconnect wit Net- i’LL put in work offline!
wording, and kinda forced. I appreciate the attempt cause it's not bad but again trying to do too much
You have potential, I don't see you champing this or anything but with a little help I think I could get you as rookie of the year or something
Shoot me a PM
Don’t bring a knife to this gun fight, I'd beat u brawlin or spinnin shots
I aint boastin iLL, when I post to kill...it aint cause a Mag gave me winnin odds!
Nice opener
Fight me and leave jawless, wit that Scripture a bomb at this Box office
Critics stand denying, me vs dandelion…not that weed see the head pop off it!
ok
At Lunch wit your Family guy, wifey’ll gag on this Peter n waste all that
I know I better like the Stewie try, or ima serve the hoe PBnJ w/a Baseball bat!
ok not bad
Script u get ya first whippin then go feelin yaself, aint nobody fearin iLL
U can drive thru tootin ya own horn, after I smash ya face in the steerin wheel!
lol dope here
Don’t be giving the web addresses, I travel thru States and across lines
Dots com on nerd shit, but if u think disconnect wit Net- i’LL put in work offline!
nice ender
Net - this was a better verse I've seen from you. You actually stayed consistent. The family guy bar was good, a little iffy but it worked. The dandelion bar was ok at best - prob your lightest bar but overall you actually produced some quality here. Not bad at all. Need to see more of this from you man.
At Lunch wit your Family guy, wifey’ll gag on this Peter n waste all that
I know I better like the Stewie try, or ima serve the hoe PBnJ w/a Baseball bat!
^^ this might be the worst family guy punch ive ever seen
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