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1-2 Punch XXIIII
Week 1 Predictions
Smog been doing this for a hot minute. He can usually be consistent but I think his long stints of driving a burger truck tire him out which causes some inconsitency. Ive seen a couple decent bars from Easy but he does need some work..
Smog
70/30
Great idea..... Let's put predictions in the thread! That way we have even less to talk about on the mag.....
Check.
You hauling fruits... So if your bitch ever rode she's ashamed of ya, right?
If ya girl says keep on trucking, Smog, its only cuz your gone for days at a time
@Smog
Dropped outta highschool to punk faggots fa paper n bleed fa the doe dawg
So when it comes to easy money, I'm snatchin his chain bracelet n wallet...no prob
Concept there but execution lacked harshness and sting. I think if you would have executed this differently, it may have been A LOT more effective. For an example;Originally Posted by EasyToBeat
Ya wife a major hoe, she much rather every other D cuz this lames no good,
If she ever tells you "keep on trucking", it's so she could finish fuckin everyone in the neighborhood.
Something to that effect would have had more sting... You feel me? Your execution was a little to opened ended and left for voters to speculate on it.
To much of an obvious flip on his name. Wasn't feeling this at all, Smog. However; I do think you edged this tho, only because your punch was more of a direct shot, simple/basic but direct and the slightest impact it had out weighed your opponent.
Smog w/ the edge.
Name Br&nd
Easy...the concept was dope but the wording was off...
Smog I thought this was dope
V/Smog
Damn Easy I liked the personal but ur setup took away from the punch and the rhyme scheme was off. Smog ur nameplay was basic but the flip was effective and the punch as a whole was direct.
V/Smog the punch was flipped better like I said it had more impact. Easy could've turned the tables if he had that setup more polished
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Easy shoulda set his concept up better with a misdirection, he was wayyy too strait forward. Smog's worded his better, even tho easy's concept was better smog's obvi np was executed better.
V. Smog
vote smog/ barely
i thought both came pretty average. I felt easy could of done more with the punch. It had potential, just dissapointed with how little u did with it. Smogs wasn't as good a play but executed it better. Could go either way though.
This was surprisingly entertaining. Easy had a humorous personal and Smog had a raw, aggressive bar that had tremendous payoff in his closer. Now, I know Smog being a truck driver is probably old news, but the way Easy flipped it was fresh imo. I don't normally go against personals, and here I really don't want to. However, Smog had a closer with emphasis. Throwing "No prob" in there was a great way to counter the simplicity of the "easy" np. There was a lot of work thrown in there to keep the readers attention. I applaud both of you for what is currently my favorite battle of the week. My winner is Smog, although it wasn't decisive.
v-Smog
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