I give you negative feedback because unlike these others guys I actually care if you get better.
I give you negative feedback because unlike these others guys I actually care if you get better.
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I know I was joking and thank you lolOriginally Posted by Stranger
nope I give you negative feedback each time too lol.. your writing doesn't suck, just need to understand that horrorcore is played out and holds no substance. When you talk about killing yourself, don't just skip the details and go to the act, explain what lead to it, the mental state of the person, the weather, the air, the mood of the room and atmosphere, the type of music you could imagine playing in the background, is there a dog barking? a breeze blowing through the window from the small crack in the courner.
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True and I don't just do horrorcore lol.
think about your topic as if it where a scene in a movie and you are the director... now explain that entire scene to us before moving on with the story, this adds a backdrop and sets people up to begin getting emotionally involved with your charactor.
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Word I know what your saying yo thanks
Literally make love to your topic.
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Drop some feedback in the book of life. I wrote it in 15 minutes while I was fucking gone off dabs
Gonna play some Old Republic before I go to work, maybe after I get off.
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Aight man
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