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Thread: smokey 16s

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    smokey 16s

    [Soundclick]12942340[/soundclick]
    Smokey 16s
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    Re: smokey 16s

    this is sounding underground to me.

    haha i like this beat that like crystal sound..

    Hmm the writtens are good. my favorite part was verse 3.

    something sounds off, like forced. but its not bad. I think with some smoothing out this would be all good. The writtens are cool. the hook is.. like its all good. but i think it needs a little more work.
    Last edited by Oxymoron; October 16th, 2014 at 07:14 PM
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