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    Sorry for being not on lately...droppin' sum new.

    Day 1:
    Boy was walking home from school, confronted a couple of guys
    There were five or six of em, they started talkin' bout his size
    Grabbed him by the head, they threw him to the ground
    They shot him in the chest, next day the boy was found
    Police came to the parents door, they told them what happened
    That he was found dead on the floor, shot and abandoned
    The police watched the parents, crying in agony
    What happened? They couldn't believe this tragedy

    Day 2:
    It was a cold winter day, the grass covered in frost
    The parents at the graveyard, crying about there lost
    Both of them got on there knees, praying this was just a dream
    They realized it wasn't, they began to cry and scream
    The boy was put in the soil, left to rest in peace
    But that didn't help, the family's sorrow began to increase
    They spent hours at there homes over the phones crying
    No one knew that the boy was in threat of dying

    Day 3:
    The boy came up on the news, everyone was in shock
    It became viral, the whole worlds hearts stopped
    The people who killed him were now in jail
    Sentenced to life in prison, no choice of bail
    But the guy who pulled the trigger we was put on death row
    For something that he did two days ago
    They put him on a chair, got ready the chemicals
    Lethal injections, The sight was truly terrible
    The family was there to watch justice be served
    Now the murderer got what he deserved
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    Re: Sorry for being not on lately...droppin' sum new.

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    Re: Sorry for being not on lately...droppin' sum new.

    You've got the storyteller style. Well done with carrying out the story through properly. I liked this one.

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    Re: Sorry for being not on lately...droppin' sum new.

    Thanks TGF
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    Re: Sorry for being not on lately...droppin' sum new.

    Bumping.
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    Re: Sorry for being not on lately...droppin' sum new.

    Funnys My Name
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    Re: Sorry for being not on lately...droppin' sum new.

    LOONG TIME NO FEED BACK
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