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    You've Earned a Custom Title! zonez's Avatar
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    don't have a title for this

    Our bodies are eternal.
    Our souls are timeless.
    Our minds link reality to body and soul allowing us to exist.
    Because we do not fully understand reality in our minds,
    we go through life with the notion that our bodies grow old becoming weak and fragile.
    We are never certain on what we should truly believe,
    most of the time we are frightened at the thought of our own death.
    The body is eternal, the soul is timeless.

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    Re: don't have a title for this

    Short n to the point. Very imaginative meanings and descriptive tones. Another good work.

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    Re: don't have a title for this

    I think you should always have some sort of title for something you create. Your title gives a bit of identity, like people, people have names. This was more of a thought that needed to be expanded on. It feels detached and wandering. There doesn't seem to be a clear direction and it comes off a bit repetitive. More time spent on expanding your thought process here should bring about something good to read and more than likely give you a name fitting of such a creation. But for right now, this is just a thought.

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