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    Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    [SC]https://soundcloud.com/juiceboxbandit-2/welcome-to-my-world[/SC]


    Wasn't really diggin the feed from the last, so I decided to change it up a bit. Track off of

    "Silhouetted Soliloquy"


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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    Bump. Unexpectedly no feed yet. #Tragic
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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    Mr. McWiggles? lol. I like the funky vibe of the beat. Did you produce? You ripped this. Great flow, i like how you used a bunch of different schemes to keep it interesting. lyrics were dope too. some punches that stuck with me were alienated/ rosswell. autopilot/ jet lag in my system. ahead of you brother/conjoined twin. Delivery - you slurred your words a bit sometimes which made some of the words hard to catch. Good energy though. The quality sounded just a little off too, maybe adding a different effect or a little reverb would warm the vocals up and make it blend better. Overall fucking dope song, and its currently being criminally slept on

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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    Appreciate it the feed bro, last bump. I'll bump it again in a week or so.
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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    Sorry I listened but was working the other day.

    I like the beat. I couldn't really vibe as much as liked. Its really nothing against you but I've found I kinda zone out on punch line heavy tracks. Like I feel disconnected sometimes because the tracks typically are more showmanship than telling me about something. I think in your case you do correlate your rhymes to yourself in a bit more personal way so I tend to pay more attention to your tracks than I normally would this type of track, so it does catch my attention on a good level.

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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    ok listening, shut the fuck up, a million shoutouts lol. beat smooth as hell. as usual your flow is composed and on point. i like the kick, shit got a bounce to it. lyrics on, i hear you talking nigga. i fucks with this. put it in my email
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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    coool

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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    good job keep it up

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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    This is smooth... damn. loving the vibe of everything here. flow was dope. beat was dope. words were dope. "I dream big 'cause small time livin' results in death.. just ask Gary Coleman." haha.. Some sick stuff in there. I was noddin' the whole way through my dude. No complaints on my end. Definitely will be listening again. Keep 'em coming.

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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    that beat is my stuff. liking it a lot.

    Damn, i almost forgot i wasnt listning to a cat on the forum. This is very solid, professional sound quality/ Lyrics were all good to me. flow and multis were doing it for me.

    well im quite happy i clicked on this. peace. stay up/
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    Re: Welcome 2 My World [Revamped Classic]

    I like a good jazz beat. This is decent. Nice vibe to it. Your flow is smooth too and rode the beat well. Some nice multi's also.

    Cool track bro

    I'd like to hear some more.

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