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    The Heart of a Writer

    The Heart of a Writer

    we all surround our hearts with certain types of devices
    barrier walls, some heated, coursing security
    others cold and bitter
    Some stoic and stone, keeping out the arrows
    eventually one will sink through the murder holes
    cupid will die laughing

    I've seen barbed wire, keeping everything away
    tearing at the soul
    I figured writers could etch words out of those twisted wires
    people staring in from outside with awe,
    not that I would recommend for the sake of art
    but the twisted image can be beautiful
    red smears a crimson sky
    flames of passion can be one hell of a craft

    contortionists
    we bend those spines back,
    twisting at the chemicals running through
    we live for that crack
    addictive, seductive... it's nothing
    but we reach for it every-time we sink a pen in
    dabble at a typewriter
    Twist those wires
    sometimes the darkness is a solstice
    I've had the sun burn out my eyes
    twist my skin into a leathery smile
    Cancerous and required,
    but the night has spoon-fed me words
    cradled me into its silence
    and spit me out the other-side
    rings of hope around my eyes
    waking up to realize
    that these twisting wires are nothing but silly puddy
    and my hearts content -
    steadily pumping oblivion.
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    Re: The Heart of a Writer

    Links up soon... I'm poop'n.
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    Re: The Heart of a Writer

    you dont nees links anymore lol

    this was so good such smooth and silky
    stuff here. i dunno where to begin
    to be honest. the imagery this gave was
    so vivid i really dove into this like
    towards the middle i found myself
    concentrating on each line...
    the ease of your words from line was
    absolutely great.

    sometimes the darkness is a solstice
    thaat right there was just perfect.
    really cool drop man hope to see more

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    Re: The Heart of a Writer

    Excellent imagry here. Your imagination and way with words creates amazing pictures.

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    Re: The Heart of a Writer

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    Re: The Heart of a Writer

    Glad I got to read this.

    your images are on-fucking-fire, as always. Your language is nonchalant, and yet, has this Kierkegaardian angst/depression wrapped through. You're use of various poetic devices kept the read interesting, constantly switching up the habitual rhythm we create in our head. I'd say you used a few key words a little too often, to be exact, the word 'wire.' Not to say there are 5-6 great synonyms, but rather, there is a way to use a word often that doesn't throw you off. I think the sound of the word just kind of strikes you, and it reads odd having it jump out that much. This could be a personal preference, however.

    I'm glad to see you posting still. I'd love for you to return the favor

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