Star Light, Star Bright (Dedication)

[N.F.M.]

Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight...

I wish I may...

I wish I might...

Have the wish I make tonight...

Do you know what I wish?

Ehem...

I wish for my daughter to be happy...

H'yeah...

Are you ready?

Heheh...

Twinkle, twinkle, little star.
How I wonder what you are.
Up above the clouds so high.
Like a diamond in the sky.

I thought I'd take the time to dedicate a rhyme to Aidynn.
Cuz some day you'll get older and know why those haters hatin.
Right now, you prolly wonder why you keep on switchin homes.
Why your mommy and your daddy aren't together any more.
And I know you're in your own world, you haven't gotta clue.
But just know your mommy loves you, and your daddy's here for you.
See, your mommy was a beatnik and your daddy was a bum.
Mommy's friends were kinda gothic, daddy worked down in the slum.
He was livin on the streets, mommy ran away from home.
With connects they found a zone, where your daddy setup throne.
See, your daddy was a thug, but your mama had his heart.
Even though the cops would come, they would never fall apart.
But your daddy worked very hard to keep them outta jail.
He was legally paid by day and at night, was raisen hell.
Started makin sales dressed in all black, ridin in a decoy.
Cuz mama was pregnant with you, and daddy was a d-boy.
And girl I mean a ghostboy, he started pullin jack moves.
Feds kept questionin your mama, but your daddy had to.
He didn't want you and your mom to live the same way he did.
So daddy moved back on the streets, and mommy got conceited.
Daddy found another crib, and mommy moved back in.
But not before a star was born, and that's when you come in.
Daddy worked to give you and your mom a better life.
You and mommy had it all, daddy had to pay the price.
Cuz he worked days and nights, couldn't spend time with his wife.
Mommy walked outta sight, that's when daddy's skin turned white.
He lost everything he had, even includin common sense.
Cuz he saw your mama's boyfriend, daddy nearly snapped his neck.
But instead, daddy let you and your mommy walk away.
He was at your mama's boyfriend's house the very next day.
And then mommy gotta lawyer, and your daddy posted bond.
But the state lost some evidence, so charges were withdrawn.
And then mommy's lawyer summoned daddy's lawyer up to court.
With restraining orders, tryna hit your daddy for support.
I know you cannot comprehend right now, but some day you will see.
Just how much your daddy loves you and how much you mean to me.
But for right now, just close your eyes baby, go to sleep.
And have sweet dreams while daddy sings this little melody.

Twinkle, twinkle, little star.
How I wonder what you are.
Up above the clouds so high.
Like a diamond in the sky.

Twinkle, twinkle, little star.
How I wonder what you are.
Up above the clouds so high.
Like a diamond in the sky.

Twinkle, twinkle, little star...

How I wonder what you are...

Up above the clouds so high...

Like a diamond in the sky...

[Cody Nash]

wow this actually had a really sick flow to it when you speed it up.. I found myself into it. the lyrical content isn't that amazing, but the personal struggle and sentimental value the piece carries is evident and it also shows a bit of resentment/dedication going hand in hand with the Aidynn character. I expected this to be poo like the piece I rudely commented on before haha.. this wasn't horrible though.. I think your conent could get doper as far as line for line creativity goes.. but I still got some enjoyability from this. cool.


- Cry

[N.F.M.]

Thanks... I'll try to get 3 links up some time this week.

[Puma1996]

really dope as hell,flow was raw lyrics had some good vocab in them, i felt like the connection between the reader and the piece was easy to make,and i like those kind of pieces enjoyble to read man,keep spittin em

RTF ?---> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...160/index.html
thanks

[lostinlove]

Hey baby, it was really hard for me to read this, you know how I feel about your ex but your daughter is an angel, how she can call herself her mom beats me but it was really sweet. I know if my dad was anything like you, I wouldn't be the way I am and I know Aidynn will grow to love you more then her mother. This is just what sprang to mind when I read this.
<3Love you. ~Kirsten Wymer.