User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: δεινός σαῦρος

  1. #1
    Mining uranium. FortyTilFive's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Location
    Mass
    Posts
    103

    δεινός σαῦρος

    In the title are the Greek words dienos, meaning powerful, terrible, wonderous, and sauros, meaning lizard.










    The rulers of the planet from Triassic to Cretaceous
    They tread across the granite on a land it was vivacious,
    Continents collided, world-wide it was survival
    Nobody allied it was savage, it was tribal,
    So hurry find the forest, Spinosaurus on the hunt
    It took a fuckin' war just to endure much of the brunt,
    Jaws grippin', you're a goner in harms way, no elusion
    Flesh rippin, you just lost the arms race of evolution,
    Combative adornments which encompass the braincase
    Attack with three horns if you come past with your game face,
    Impregnable herds encircle the young and fortify
    Incredibly blurred, puncture the lung and mortify,
    Nobody wants to die but everybody has to eat
    This creature walks too high so lets comply, attack the feet,
    Collaborate when life is hellish, develope and work together
    The primal can be angellic, the relic, a buried treasure,
    Iguanadon is starving like Ramadan, no vegetation, the sun roars
    Then hits a phenomenon like a thousand atomic bombs and they're done for...


    Link1
    Link2
    Move the crowd like a Buddha cloud
    The purple, puff, puff, pass 'round the circle




    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  2. #2
    Town Rapist Ink Poyzin's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    In your girl.
    Age
    39
    Posts
    1,347

    Re: δεινός σαῦρος

    Really cool piece, man. Life for them and what ended life for them.
    I'm a be honest with you.. Peeped your last piece, I didn't really know what to say about it. It was short.. And.. I still gotta drop feedback to it. But this, alot different than that... Much better. No offense.
    Flow here was on track. It was structured good. I disliked how short it was, because i'm sure you could've thought up much more. I kept wanting more.. But for what has been said, this was dope. Really good topic ya picked. Can't say I've seen it used before. Really enjoyed the read, man. Interesting. Good work. Keep writing. Welcome to RB.

  3. #3
    Mining uranium. FortyTilFive's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Location
    Mass
    Posts
    103

    Re: δεινός σαῦρος

    No offense taken man, I deeply appreciate your honesty and I actually think my last peice kinda sucked. It was just from some writtens that I had from a while back and this peice was my redemption from that. Regardless, thanks for the feed and I'll be sure to keep up with any of your Open Mics as well... Peace
    Move the crowd like a Buddha cloud
    The purple, puff, puff, pass 'round the circle




    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  4. #4
    You've Earned a Custom Title! lilcrime6's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    jersey
    Posts
    52
    Battle Record
    0-1

    Re: ?????? ??????

    nice work on ur drop

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  5. #5
    You've Earned a Custom Title! One Man Army's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Detroit, Michigan
    Posts
    99
    Battle Record
    1-5

    Re: δεινός σαῦρος

    had nice imagery and vocab better then others i have seen from you keep it up bro
    battle record: 1-1

    "It's the one man army, general subliminal
    Fly through the sky, ready for war with syllables"

Tags for this Thread

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •