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    Post lyricism

    Check me out now, behold lyricism
    Haters try to cremate me but i still exist
    I'm limitless, envision this is genesis
    I'm sippin' cris, spittin' this 'til I'm spiritless
    I CAN'T BREATHE!
    I got the smell of death in my nose
    Blood stains, I got this nigga flesh on my clothes
    The best kept secret, thought that I would never be told
    Sit back and watch the clever unfold, level your flows
    Cuz when it comes to them bars nigga, I'm godzilla
    When its time to sing songs, I'm king kong
    when its time to lace tracks, I'm AIDS black
    Motherfucker I'm a monster
    You wanna move a lot of work in ya hood I'll be your sponsor
    Take half or all o' ya bread like we was partnas
    Collect my money in envelopes, like I'm a mobsta
    Walk through this concrete jungle like I was Kontra
    Like dreadlocks I'm at the top of the rasta
    Hit 'em up and give 'em a seizure like I'm a barber
    Come through and put in that work with the revolver
    You wont, I would like tiger but i aint a golfer
    I dont gotta hear your album cause I'm the author
    Wrote the period, the question mark, and the comma
    Wrote the first, second, and the third part of the saga
    Yeah I hear 'em say they go hard, but I go harder
    Yesterday, the day before, today and tomorra
    I blood sweat and tears, shit piss and saliva
    Bought the pacifier, the stroller, crib, and the walker
    Shine getting darker, you aint gimme a dollar
    No drama
    When I see you I say thats my son
    Not cause you my man, cause I'm ur father
    Got a lot of verses, more hooks than Tarver
    Underground king like Arthur
    You find me on the block deadin' niggaz on sales, dont even bother
    And your customer chose me cause mines is harder
    Next time you bag up make 'em larger, cause I robbed ya
    Your sale dead like you need a charger
    Daily departa, I'm known to bang that tool
    Abandon, you aint never heard a name that cool
    Spittin sixteen bars I'ma change that rule
    Somebody with no bars musta made that rule
    The industry owe me a lot, this a payback move
    Ride the track like a Maybach, smooth
    They say text jam on you, but you gotta pop your gun right
    You goin mess around and get popped you dumb hype
    They guns jam up when it's time for the gun fight
    Cuz they get so nervous they cock they guns twice
    What would you do if they had a plot for your life
    And all you really had was a glock and one mic
    Abandon, walk through they blocks with that ice
    Go to they pizza shop, and stop for one slice
    Get some garlic on the top and one sprite
    Now thats enough time to pop if you want right?
    But if you ever pull out a ox be dumb nice
    Cuz I'll stab ya whole flock with one knife
    They mad cause I got more checks than air nikes
    If I want it, I cops it on site
    When it comes to spending money I stop at no price
    I take a long time to stop spinning like the last dice
    That four powerful enough to drop both y'all
    Had a whole block flooded with the high most squad
    My gun bust no matter how near or far
    A lyricist, when I look in the mirror I see a rhyme
    When I'm pushing my whip, I see a rhyme
    When I'm sexing my chick I see a rhyme
    And weverytime I squeeze my dick I pee a rhyme
    Why ya man so washed up if he could rhyme
    I got enough bars to give you a three to nine
    The supremacist is ceremonial, masters in lyricist
    Deliver poetry, vogulty above vintriliquist
    With splendidness gave thug a genesis
    Put an end to this senselessness.. ABANDON


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    Re: lyricism

    This was good man... the flow was there again and you had a couple real nice lines in there.

    My favorite lines:

    "Collect my money in envelopes, like I'm a mobsta
    Walk through this concrete jungle like I was Kontra
    Like dreadlocks I'm at the top of the rasta
    Hit 'em up and give 'em a seizure like I'm a barber"


    Some of it was filler but a lot of it was pretty decent... what I think you gotta work on now is punchlines since you got the multis & rhymes down.


    Stay up... look forward to readin more of ya shit


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    Re: lyricism

    i thaut this was dope

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    Re: lyricism

    thnks man

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