Finished Song

[cheesemanxl]

how come gettin money never gets borin
i make millions while you bitches just snorin
skills so good i should be tourin
all you hater bitches i be ignorin


im a well paid city slicker
the numbers on my deposits just gettin bigger
listen her i will kill any spitter
man im so fine i look good sittin on the shiter
but yeah im a geek spendin all my time on twitter
im a nice guy too tell your girl i wont hit her
see i dont believe in abuse to women
if you want a fight go fuck men then
man im so fat, i eat too many mint thins
lookin like a bear i should live in a forest
im stupid too my dream car is a ford taurus
aight thats enough now back to the chorus

how come gettin money never gets borin
i make millions while you bitches just snorin
skills so good i should be tourin
all you hater bitches i be ignorin

im makin billions call me bill gates
and ill kill any one that still hates
i dont think you under stand your real fate
but once you do its too late
you'll be underwater and overweight
ima hit you with that glock this is a chris brown date
rihanna man that was pretty sad
but i saw those naked pics looks like he didnt beat her ASS too bad
man if i could hit that it'd be pretty rad
i know she would ride on time havin me going "o dag"
and when its over she soundin like austin "you want another shag"
but i aint on that powers shit
i just go out, get really lit
and run in circles till i have to sit
after that im get your girl wetter than niagra falls
ill have that slut beggin for these balls

how come gettin money never gets borin
i make millions while you bitches just snorin
skills so good i should be tourin
all you hater bitches i be ignorin

see my skills are more fire than a fuckin inferno
so dont mess wit me unless you want a burn ho
so you can come in my office then turn GO
cause i got straps on me like you dont know
and i dont know but i feel like sayin leprachaun
i know my songs got your heart beatin till your chest is gone
i got bitches battlin me but that soft as a baby shep then just a fawn
and yes i know this shit is long drawn
but its over now so bye bye in a few minutes ill be long gone

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tell me what you think

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LINKS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ao-397828.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...le-397925.html

[cheesemanxl]

uppin this

[cheesemanxl]

uppin again

[Well Versed]

ok on tha real...u had me rollin on that first line...as u progressed u RUSHED it...u fell off homie...flow was good...basic concept...good metaphorz(first verse)...ya hook was pretty good...dude ya just rele gotta put some heart n soul into it...

yo RTF on my TRAPPIN LIKE A KING...ull be diggin it...

[Obese_Jesus]

you'll be underwater and overweight
ima hit you with that glock this is a chris brown date
rihanna man that was pretty sad
but i saw those naked pics looks like he didnt beat her ASS too bad

This shit fucking FLOORED me, I was laughing so goddamn hard hahaha!


- O.J.

[cheesemanxl]

lol thanks oj



uppin

[cheesemanxl]

Up yo can i get some feed on this ... Ill rtf

[Numlungz]

this was ok...I agree with OJ that was the best lines in the whole song...I didn't care for the chorus/hook...I say this should get a 5/10...check out one of my post they're a few on the first page.

[Obese_Jesus]

I quoted you in my sig.

Congrats. =)


- O.J.

[Well Versed]

Lol Nice!!!

[Baron Mynd]

You can thank me next time for the Open Mic Of The Month nomination, Cheese.

Seriously ROFLZED @ the line abour Rihanna's ass though.. This was great..

[cheesemanxl]

thanks for the sig quote i was flattered lol


oh and thanks for the nomination .... even though it was out of spite

[Baron Mynd]

I still have it sigged, I just have two names, one with the exclamation point at the end and one without. Yours must be in the one without. Lol.

[cheesemanxl]

lol guess so ....

hey can you guys vote on my battle with C. March ...
were not gettin any hits on it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-398123.html


and dont vote for me unless you think i won .. i dont wanna cheat