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    Nightmare at Cape Fear -(Leave 2 links, I'll feed)

    There exist with the Cape Fear river a cruel myth, a myth portrayed with giant catfish, bigger than people, that eat anything; This myth that accuses the waters of hiding years of unfortunate souls stacked upon each other, bodies made homes for the river life. Tonight hold these things in your mind, as young Danny Walker and Christopher Hagen test their hearts to the river, that truth is irrelevant, when it is invisible. Tonight we slip out of our skin and into imagination. A Nightmare at Cape Fear.


    A Nightmare at Cape Fear
    Written by HighEngineChief
    (Special Guest: Truth)


    The Trussel Bridge
    12:28 A.M.

    HighEngineChief
    Truth

    Coming up the bridge they peer off into the black water
    Deep into the murky mist for a glimpse at the masked monster
    The moon in halve conjure, 2 friends looking for a belief to latch on to
    Down in the bleak and vast water, They will see one last monster


    Danny wobbles toward the bridge,
    what moves there?
    Chris looks up at him grinning in a cool glare
    "Take a look over the edge man, are you scared?
    I heard the catfish are bigger then us both paired"

    ~*~*~*~
    Danny scolds him with a cold stare
    "Dude, why would i do that, you know i can't swim
    Grandad says they're just rumors, go on and ask him"

    ~*~*~*~
    "Then why you being such a pussy, just fuckin' dive in"

    Danny thinks of a lie, then
    Smirks with his chin raised
    "No, why don't you if your so damn brave"

    "I'll keep my pride then and jump right after you cave
    (And now his true aim)
    ~*~*~*~
    Go ahead and move, take one step to the edge and give me proof!"
    The adrenaline's so high, it's busting loose
    "Yeah like i said after you, I've got nothing to prove
    you jump in and show us who's the bigger fool"

    ~*~*~*~
    "Alright chicken, at least look out over the edge with me
    Look, i think that dude down there is dead, is he?"


    Chris beckons Danny's attention with the lure of his fear
    Bringing him closer to the railing, obscure to what is near


    "What dude, your seeing shit chris, and your acting fucking strange
    that look on your face isn't funny man, it needs to fucking change"

    With swiftness
    Danny's pushed into the rivers embrace
    "Here take a closer look, tell me the view from the base..."

    Chris laughs with wicked lymrics of hateful joy
    It was funny then, but now Danny isn't making noise
    No cries, no bubbles, no splashing, no life

    "Hey Danny! Danny, you all right!?"


    No answer, Shit! Alone in the vast night
    Then from the corner of his eye's, flashlights
    Fuck! Run! Duck!
    Escape
    The woods, The tree's
    I'm safe....
    Until...





    Into the Wooded Shadow
    12:50 A.M.

    Great fields of dark figures cloud the moon
    the rustling sounds of gloom - so profoundly smooth
    He hears them shouting; dogs barking, echoes rounding
    Hands shuffle the blackness to navigate his outing
    His swollen heart pounding; Jesus Christ what did i do
    I' de have stopped Danny from dropping If only I knew

    (He hears whispers in the wind)

    Some erie voice calls his name again
    "Chris." "Chris." Chris."

    The bond only reminds him how lonely it is
    Then he see's them, fast figures far in the brush
    Dark men or women circling all through the shrubs
    Laughing, taunting me - the volume grows awesomely
    All things blossom in his head like a bomb of dreams
    (Nightmares) - Are you scared Chris? - Damn right scared
    He tries to suppress the obvious but the damn fright flares
    "Danny boy I'm so sorry! You will be missed!"

    "You Killed Me Chris...
    You Killed me - Chris;
    I'm Dead, Dead - (Gone)
    Dead..
    hahahahahaha


    Flashlights follow me further
    Yet the light just isn't - far enough



    No Escape
    1:15 A.M.


    Ring around the rosie; he feels lost in hell
    Without a pocket full of posies
    Caught in a melt of time and self
    Driven insane by a fightening spell
    Chris! - Chris!

    Damn this river, spiteful of curiosity
    Vengeful against my rightful idiocracy

    How was Chris to know.. He would die
    Collapsing the river - deep inside

    The shadows prevail through the trees
    Dancing in ignorance of his fearful pleas
    Please, have mercy on his soul
    But no demon lives - that doesn't kill at home

    Chris, I'm drowning Chris;
    It's your turn to jump,
    Just take a peek.

    (Haunting Laughter)


    hahahahahaha


    The monster that used to be his friend
    Now hunts his flesh for daily bread
    The ghost runs mad in the brittle September leaves
    Chris frantically sprints - from a beast he never see's

    Flashlights follow me further
    Yet the light just isn't - far enough



    The Black Water
    1:42 A.M.

    Somewhere between dark and exhausted
    Chris stumbles down a hill and tosses
    Hitting stumps and sticks
    Every stone - Every fucking inch
    The laughing wimbs of ghost sends him
    Right under the tip of deaths chin -
    (That's when he hits the water)

    Splashing around in a fit of somber
    Cryptic haunter - he looks around paranoid
    Scared, avoiding anything compared to a noise
    --- Something grabs his foot ---
    He looks down at the capture/crook
    Danny boy, and he's pulling with so much might
    Chris slips under the river, with no more fight
    And as he looks up...

    Flashlights shine on the surface
    Yet the light just isn't - far enough



    Closure


    ....In recent news, a boy was found dead early this morning on the Cape Fear River bank near Eastover. The police have identified the victim as Christopher Hagen, a 15 year old boy. Authorities say Christopher was there the night before with a friend, Danny Walker; evidently he and Danny were standing on a trussel bridge when Christopher pushed Danny off of it. Danny was found alive 5 miles down river, Christopher was not seen again until 6:00 A.M. this morning. Official say his pants got caught on an under water stump and he drowned. More on this story later. Back to you Tom.

    Chris, Chris,
    It's your turn to jump
    Just take a peak

    hahahahaha

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    Re: Nightmare at Cape Fear -(Leave 2 links, I'll f

    uppin

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    Re: Nightmare at Cape Fear -(Leave 2 links, I'll f

    is this your boyfriend dog?

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    Re: Nightmare at Cape Fear -(Leave 2 links, I'll f

    A whole piece and you obsess over the pic... right.

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    Re: Nightmare at Cape Fear -(Leave 2 links, I'll f

    i liked it. awesome and original concept for a rap song. lyrically it was good, and the flow was perfect for the most part.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...er-368635.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-368598.html

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    Re: Nightmare at Cape Fear -(Leave 2 links, I'll f

    damm dog nice shit right here...contains 100% emotion and it really puts you in the setting you described...

    feed my Quick Bars that i posted...their titled "Quick Bars" and "Quick Bars 2"

    oh yeah dude how do you change your title like im a "Noweight"...how do you change that??? is there a way???

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    Re: Nightmare at Cape Fear -(Leave 2 links, I'll f

    This was hot..jsut uppin it for you



    *leving feed ina bit*

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    Re: Nightmare at Cape Fear -(Leave 2 links, I'll f

    lmao@ the asian boy band......


    Anyways, I used to live in North Carolina, I've heard all about the catfish shit...
    This is good for a spoken word rhyme, can't really see it being a song that I'd bump thru the hood lol....but the shit was well written, very very creative, never thought I'd live to see the day where someone wrote a rap about the catfish in cape fear

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    Re: Nightmare at Cape Fear -(Leave 2 links, I'll f

    Hey fam, aint seen you in a while, how's business?

    I loved the piece, best one i've read in weeks. The concept was some nice horror movie oriented shit which immediately made it stand out, The use of vocab was solid enough to engage interest without being over the top. The imagery was the strongest aspect of the piece, you developed the story well and painted a picture of the initial back and forth between the friends (nice work by truth there as well) and the following haunting and panic the main charecter felt as well. It held my interest despite the length. The news report was a nice touch as the end.

    Keep posting, good work.


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