Brandon Cee (0-1) vs RAS Jr (0-1)

[Chrit.]

LLL Week 2

Checkin due Wed 23.59 EST (late/no checkin = -2 votes)
Verses due Fri 23.59 EST
Line limit: 16 MIN, 30 MAX



Good luck.

[RAS.]

Hey Hey brandon,whats the count

[Brandon Cee]

18?

Word. Check.

[RAS.]

Brandon has no stamina his verses can't go the distance......
Last week he tried to jump Meters,and only made it a few inches
I bet you're an adrenaline junkie that loves to be stomped crippled
So I'm giving you a rush...off in a stretcher, to the nearest hospital
after I bury you your crew will second guess about you being around
then you'll really be by yourself,cause I'ma put you solo underground
Brandon concepts are old as fuck,He needs to be original to beat me
Sure your punches are from 09 B.C..but that's before A.D.
Ras losing!!! Nah, but I'll send you to a casket with the quickness
Actin like I don't got shit on ya verse..until I wipe my ass with it
With these punches destroying Brandon is such an easy mission
get your lip bus so fast...greyhound will charge you admission
Last week ya verse was morbid,I thought this biter Spits fire
You would have won but forgot to get your verse from Mariah
Your not best the competitor,but good at showing up on time
So I'm not too surprised that all your verses make deadlines
My 18 lines is a nightmare to this fag,directing horror movies fast
You may not get the staring role..but I can put you in a cast

Bitch!!!!

[Brandon Cee]

I'm your ruler...I'll kill you, then slam your face in manure, I'm serial
Cause you drop the same amount of shit hence RAS being Jr. material
You're a goof and a fucking disgrace to humanity, unaware that I'll win
I'd tell you to act your age, but you're 25 and scared to say where you live
I'll smash your face in and then I'll begin to expose you while I score
See, it's Saturday, but I dropped late so it could look closer than before
You're full of shit, no miracle in the world can help you stop my wheels
But with your magic fingers you make Ironman look more like Copperfield
You ain't a prodigy - Mozart and the like aren't compared to this toad
I'll leave you ass royally flushed, so that you feel like an air to the throne
I'm hardly caring because I'm known to drop heat without trying to hit
But you're known for your low blows...and a few nights of riding on dicks
I'm killing you softly, but you're killing me never when you swing hard
What if God was one of us? Well, you can tell us when you meet God
I'm not done, but you've been thrashed since line 1, you're just finished
If it came to this melting pot, America was better before you lived in it

16. Good luck.

[RAS.]

thanks man

[Brandon Cee]

I edited in 16. Vote.

[Cody Nash]

Brandon has no stamina his verses can't go the distance......
Last week he tried to jump Meters,and only made it a few inches
lol, aiight.
I bet you're an adrenaline junkie that loves to be stomped crippled
So I'm giving you a rush...off in a stretcher, to the nearest hospital
no... predictable flip
after I bury you your crew will second guess about you being around
then you'll really be by yourself,cause I'ma put you solo underground
eh... played wordplay.
Brandon concepts are old as fuck,He needs to be original to beat me
Sure your punches are from 09 B.C..but that's before A.D.
aiight nameplay.
Ras losing!!! Nah, but I'll send you to a casket with the quickness
Actin like I don't got shit on ya verse..until I wipe my ass with it
no... played.
With these punches destroying Brandon is such an easy mission
get your lip bus so fast...greyhound will charge you admission
meh, okay-ish.
Last week ya verse was morbid,I thought this biter Spits fire
You would have won but forgot to get your verse from Mariah
nah... too many jokes around about him and her.
Your not best the competitor,but good at showing up on time
So I'm not too surprised that all your verses make deadlines
played.
My 18 lines is a nightmare to this fag,directing horror movies fast
You may not get the staring role..but I can put you in a cast
played...


vs


I'm your ruler...I'll kill you, then slam your face in manure, I'm serial
Cause you drop the same amount of shit hence RAS being Jr. material
nope.. bad...
You're a goof and a fucking disgrace to humanity, unaware that I'll win
I'd tell you to act your age, but you're 25 and scared to say where you live
eh... not so much.
I'll smash your face in and then I'll begin to expose you while I score
See, it's Saturday, but I dropped late so it could look closer than before
lol, okay.
You're full of shit, no miracle in the world can help you stop my wheels
But with your magic fingers you make Ironman look more like Copperfield
aiight.
You ain't a prodigy - Mozart and the like aren't compared to this toad
I'll leave you ass royally flushed, so that you feel like an air to the throne
nope.
I'm hardly caring because I'm known to drop heat without trying to hit
But you're known for your low blows...and a few nights of riding on dicks
played flip, but original take on it imo.
I'm killing you softly, but you're killing me never when you swing hard
What if God was one of us? Well, you can tell us when you meet God
nope..
I'm not done, but you've been thrashed since line 1, you're just finished
If it came to this melting pot, America was better before you lived in it
I'm with three people and none of us understood what this meant lol.




okay, this is like almost a tie for me...
I think brandon has nicer wording.

ras had a couple connects too, but one dudes gotta win..


so...



vote Brandon by my ass hair.

[Erupt]

after I bury you your crew will second guess about you being around
then you'll really be by yourself,cause I'ma put you solo underground
Brandon concepts are old as fuck,He needs to be original to beat me
Sure your punches are from 09 B.C..but that's before A.D.
^very nice
Ras losing!!! Nah, but I'll send you to a casket with the quickness
Actin like I don't got shit on ya verse..until I wipe my ass with it
Last week ya verse was morbid,I thought this biter Spits fire
You would have won but forgot to get your verse from Mariah
lol

vs

nuthin


vote Ras, I was quite impressed, keep getting better dude, brandon I can tell you rushed.. try not to next week man

[SmokaJoka]

Brandon concepts are old as fuck,He needs to be original to beat me
Sure your punches are from 09 B.C..but that's before A.D.

vs.

nothing



either Brandon didn't try, or audio & topicals have loosened up his edge in text....some of the concepts Ras dropped were played...like the Mariah one, an ok battle...Ras stepped up better than he did last week and Brandon still needs work or rushed


Vote - Ras

[Hexzen]

RAS -

Brandon has no stamina his verses can't go the distance......
Last week he tried to jump Meters,and only made it a few inches

-cool.

I bet you're an adrenaline junkie that loves to be stomped crippled
So I'm giving you a rush...off in a stretcher, to the nearest hospital

-worded poorly

after I bury you your crew will second guess about you being around
then you'll really be by yourself,cause I'ma put you solo underground

-ehh

Brandon concepts are old as fuck,He needs to be original to beat me
Sure your punches are from 09 B.C..but that's before A.D.

-cool nameplay

Ras losing!!! Nah, but I'll send you to a casket with the quickness
Actin like I don't got shit on ya verse..until I wipe my ass with it

-played

With these punches destroying Brandon is such an easy mission
get your lip bus so fast...greyhound will charge you admission

-forced

Last week ya verse was morbid,I thought this biter Spits fire
You would have won but forgot to get your verse from Mariah

-okay

Your not best the competitor,but good at showing up on time
So I'm not too surprised that all your verses make deadlines

-ehh

My 18 lines is a nightmare to this fag,directing horror movies fast
You may not get the staring role..but I can put you in a cast

-played


Brandon-

I'm your ruler...I'll kill you, then slam your face in manure, I'm serial
Cause you drop the same amount of shit hence RAS being Jr. material

-could have been dope last sesson

You're a goof and a fucking disgrace to humanity, unaware that I'll win
I'd tell you to act your age, but you're 25 and scared to say where you live

-no.

I'll smash your face in and then I'll begin to expose you while I score
See, it's Saturday, but I dropped late so it could look closer than before

-ehh

You're full of shit, no miracle in the world can help you stop my wheels
But with your magic fingers you make Ironman look more like Copperfield

-okay

You ain't a prodigy - Mozart and the like aren't compared to this toad
I'll leave you ass royally flushed, so that you feel like an air to the throne

-ehh

I'm hardly caring because I'm known to drop heat without trying to hit
But you're known for your low blows...and a few nights of riding on dicks

-ehh

I'm killing you softly, but you're killing me never when you swing hard
What if God was one of us? Well, you can tell us when you meet God

-worded poorly

I'm not done, but you've been thrashed since line 1, you're just finished
If it came to this melting pot, America was better before you lived in it

-okay


Overall - decent battle Brandon needs to word his bars better an ras you need to learn how to punctuate correctly. cus u put commas an explanation marks in the wrong places make ur verse annoying to read n kinda fucks with the flow. anyway i think ras came better personal an nameplay wise an it was enough to win this.


Vote - RAS

[Erupt]

ras wins 1-1

brandon loses 0-2