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Thread: feed back pls...

  1. #1
    BANNED For Spam PM's Mystic's Avatar
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    feed back pls...

    AYO,

    IM SOME 'FAT KID', U CANT DIS ME, U CANT KILL ME, U CANT PUT ME DOWN
    I KILL EMCEES LIKE U WITH MY TEARS, I JUST UNLISH MY THOUGHTS TAKIN THIS

    FONY-CLOWN
    BACK DOWN TO THE HELL HOLE WHERE THIS "ILL" EMCEE CAME FROM UNDERGROUND//

    MY LYRICALY-THOUGHT-OUT-IMAGES MURDER UR WEAK ADVERESS-ILL-NESS
    ITS LIKE U JUST WANT TO BE BUM WITH UR TUM UP, U DICK 'RIDING'GAMES ARE

    POINT-LESS//

    I WENT TO SCHOOOL KNOW AS THE FAT-K.I.D(EE)
    U CAN RIP ME, I LEAVE UR MIND IN THE DUST,
    WITH THOSE ANNOYING LINES ITS LIKE THEY ARE JUST PURE RUST
    I KNOW I MUST BE THE BEST, CUZ I'LL TAKE U DOWN, WHEN I THRUST
    THREW UR 'LINES' I LEAVE U SPEACH-LESS, I'LL JUST LEAVE THIS INGRAVEMENT ON UR

    GRAVE "R.I.P(EE)"//

    IM SOME WACK KID, BUT MY 'ID' SAYS IM 'SPIRIT', THATS COOL RABBIT
    GRABS MORE EMCEES TO THE TABLE, ONE BY ONE RABBIT GOES THROW UR

    INTENURAL-ORGAN-BULLSHIT
    I KNOW RABBIT & SPIRIT BE MORE ILLER THEN UR MOTHERS HOME COOKIN APPLE PIE, ITS

    JUST PURE SHIT//

    U CANT HIT US EVEN IF WE WERE 2 FEET IN FRONT OF UR FACE, UR LINES
    JUST MISS 'US', ITS LIKE U TRY TO HARD TO BE LIKE 'U-2' CUZ ITS US-2 VS U-2

    FAGGETS, UR PUNCHLINES
    AINT HURTN-SHIT, SO QUIT UR BULLSHIT-JACK-IN-THE-BOX-PUNCH-LINES//

    IF I WAS BLIND I COULD FLOW MORE RITHMICAL-NOUNS
    WHEN I SPIT THE SUBLIMINAL WORDS THEY SOUND
    MORE ADVESE THEN UR WEAK THRID GRADE SHIT, I RUB UR RIBS INTO THE GROUND
    RHYME AFTER RHYME RABBIT GRABS UR FEET, TIES U DOWN//

    WITH HIS "ONE-LINE-PUNC-LINE", ITS LIKE RABBIT SPITS A POETRY-LINE
    IT HITS LIKE A "MISSLE" DAMAGIN UR LUNGS WHEN I SPIT TOXICICATED-LINES
    I INFECT UR MINE MAKIN UR SPINE HURT EVERY-WHERE, U CANT COMPARE UR HUMP-DY-LINES
    TO MOTHER-GOOSE, SHE WAS THE CREATOR, AND IM THE TURMENNATOR
    WITH THE LOGICAL-MINE(d)//

    I 'ENTER' "DEATH", I 'BACKSPACE' UR RHYMES CUZ A PLUMBER WOULD 'DELETE'
    UR FABLES IN ONE 'SPACEBAR' I BACK-TRACK 'SHIFT' I RAN U OVER WITH THE ELITE//

    VERSE RABBIT SPIT, I HIT 'F5' TO REFRESH MY MIND, I HIT 'TAB'
    TO JAB//

    UR GUT WITH MY "UP-AIROW" I STAMp ON THE 'CAP-locks'
    I'VE TOOKN U OUT WITH A SINLGE glock, i've tooken u down with my'SCROLL-LOCK'//

    I TAKE U DOWN WITH MY BOTTONS EVEN A ORGAN FLOWS MORE POWERFUL WORDS
    THEN U HITTIN ON A BILL BOARD with the word "LORD"//

    HOW DARE U SAY 'RIGHT-HEMA' IS WACK, WHEN U CANT EVEN BACK-TRACK
    WITH UR OWN VOCABALRY, I LAY THIS ONE TIME GLODEN CRACK-SMACK-TIC-TAC//

    BACK AT UR FACE, U SIT THERE WHITE, THINKIN CAN I MAKE A NEW RACE
    THIS AINT UR CHANCE TO SUX UP, ITS TO SHUT UP, CUZ IM THE 'ACE'
    I OUT NUMBER UR 100-WORD-NOUNS AND MAKE MINE SOULD LIKE A PLACE//

    THATS JUST AN ADJECTIVE U CANT FLOW CEE4, UR BITCHS IS A WHORE
    I MEET HER ON 'KING-STREET-CONQUER', I MAKE MORE QUATERS THEN USA BE AT WAR
    WITH THERE OWN GOVERNMENT CUZ U FORGOT TO MAKE THE PAYMENTS ON UR 2 DOOR-car//

    I FUCKED MORE BITCHS THEN 'cee4' SINGs IN THE SHOWER WITH A no-wining-RHYME
    BOUNCIN OFF THE SHOWER-WALL, HITTIN 'UR WORST ENEMY' BACK INTO THE CRIME
    OF CHILDMOLSTIN KIDS,AT THE PLAY-GROUNDS,I flip ur corny verse with my ill rymes//

    QUIT BEATIN AROUND THE 'BUSH', U KNOW U LICK AROUND THE HAIRY-'TUSH'
    I STAB UR LINES, I KNOCK-OUT UR SPINE EACH 'ONE-WORD-LINE' I RUSH-
    UR FACE WITH THIS RAMPAGIN-FLOW, ITS LIKE IMMA MAGICAL-MAGE, BUT WAT DO I KNOW?
    ALL I DO IS JUST SPIT RHYMES AFTER U GETTIN BEATN BY RABBIT, HIMSELF, OH NOO
    THAT CANT BE, CUZ U TRY TO HARD TO SEE THE LIGHT, I JUST KNOCK OUT UR SIGHT OH

    I COULD LET RABBIT BEAT U AND CEE4 WITH HIS OWN 4-LINES
    BUT THEN I'D HAVE TO INVOLVE MY "NINES"
    THINGS GETTIN MESSY, I SHOOT UR "BACK-BONE" PLAYER, CEE4'S SPINE
    FALLS TO PEACES, LIKE HIS SINGLE PUNCH-LINE GETS EVAPORATED INTO A FINE
    DUST,U MUST BE KIDIN 'UR WORST ENEMEY'IS URSELF,OR IS IT UR DUMB & DUMBER-LINES//
    " live by the big hand, and u will save the small hand from dieing ".

    means u only live once make the best out of it...

  2. #2
    Black.Jack
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    shit was a fckin trip man

  3. #3
    Black.Jack
    Guest
    words n shit woulda been much better if u put the piece together properly sou can read it clearer n undertand ur ryhmes betta

    not hatin just statin

    Peace my man keep postin

  4. #4
    Black.Jack
    Guest
    imma post a piece lata hit us back

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