fyuuuuuuuuuuuck, your originality is like the single most great out of all net emcess ive read... thats probobly an exagerration.. but regardless... great concept, and you executed it well.. you made a great transistion from your standard poetry writing to great multie schemes and strings, and you kept the same style of abstract imagery and great metaphors. and its like the witness said.. we couldnt think of this, but when you see you do it, you just think of ways to reinvnet it.. ill never do that though, this was amazingly executed.. the point system was an added bonus..
great piece, ill give it a nom becaise it clearly deserves one..