just a battle C.wrighter no poll..holla izzle foreal..
just a battle C.wrighter no poll..holla izzle foreal..
stop postiin in the battle
somebody gon get banned
i'm tryna to tell them to stop free posting
Not Another... See Right, Writer, C.W Line
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You're battling with calories, and you're losing, wow!Originally Posted by moneyonmymind
Cause to burn the shit, you gotta fuckin move around..
You're a lyrical post and now you know it you fuck
You stand to get hit by "p"ucks like i was missing a tounge
This was the worst battle I've seen, not even worth a vote
Haven't seen so many name jokes since Moe's from the simpsons show
Fuckin faggots on this ruining our rep
How the fuck can we be the best...
With these homos battling more than the rest?
On the wings of maybe..
But maybe its just me thinkin your name a song
Your pockets got nickels in dimes so if MoneyOnyourMind some wrong
vs
nuttin.
Good shit man, i liked readin your verse, nice personals man, they was funny like the one i pasted up there.
v - C
im bout to chew this dude in pieces, spit him out like he was nasty chicken,
even if this fag be spittin, his stash of writtens, i had a vision
vs
I gotta name for you its Loser
This aint TNT but my verse just made this battle line the Closer
Only way you gone elevate high enuff if you get close to a Overdoser
ok c writer got this one for harded punches
better flow. and had more creativity
money just had mostly weak shit, some wack
flow was ok. strucutre waa descent
creativity was lacked
so v/ c writer
hit one of my battles up in my sig hoenstly
thanks
uppin the battle for votes help get this closed please people
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im bout to chew this dude in pieces, spit him out like he was nasty chicken,
even if this fag be spittin, his stash of writtens, i had a vision
--no, not even a punch
yes a dream and some gay dude wanted to battle me,
black or white, battle site, either way ill burn the dude like calories,
--blah, close but needs rewording.
frozen the cunt, choke on his lunch,
had him laughed at the whole year like he was the joke of the month,
--you can't be laughed at the whole year, if it was the joke of the MONTH no.
he now knowin my name, yeah i frozen this lame, his flow is the same,
he couldnt win if he put in cheat codes in a game,
--almost, but no
his girl was like a laptop turnin off gettin ready to restart,
cuz she was on my lap her top was off and we steady would restart,
--meh, needs rewording.
vs.
Why does your name give me a Lil Wayne impression
But maybe its just me thinkin your name a song
Your pockets got nickels in dimes so if MoneyOnyourMind some wrong
--NO
And yeah i'll smack'n you round real hard
A 3rd Grader could of came with a betta name then this retard
--nah, needs rewording
.....LoL...
I gotta name for you its Loser
This aint TNT but my verse just made this battle line the Closer
Only way you gone elevate high enuff if you get close to a Overdoser
--doesn't rhyme, and don't laugh, you aint Jay-Hova..
So let this battle be said
Going To the Wonder Bread store only way you getting close to Bread
So dont come with that i need to C a Writer crap cause its already been said
--nuh-uh, too much self glory...
I'm giving this battle to Money, he at least had the best attempts at a punch...everything else was pure wackness, both of you elevate.
v/Money
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Okay, this battle was weak ya'll. Both need to truly step it up. No quoteables from either side. Money, wtf yo? Your whole verse was whack, badly worded, and played as fuck. You really need to get some fresh concepts in ya mind. Read up on some LLL verses. And battle more often to get better. Wrighter, Your verse was mostly meh. I mean no quoteables from you. Step it up man. I know I've seen better from you. And a tip, don't center ur verses nemore, looks noobish.
My vote goes to C.Wrighter for the fact that at least he attempted punches. Both really need some work.
\\//C.Wrighter
word thanks for the advise....uppin number 3
come on people check this battle out
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Going To the Wonder Bread store only way you getting close to Bread
So dont come with that i need to C a Writer crap cause its already been said
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nuthin
V/C.wrighter.....this was one sided wrighter came wit one ight line everythin else was weak by both.......work on your punchs and personals
But maybe its just me thinkin your name a song
Your pockets got nickels in dimes so if MoneyOnyourMind some wrong
vs
wack/played shit. . . everything came off more like a storyline and there was no creativity or crisp punches. sorry
v. C. Wrighter
both hit this.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=304955
Nothing
vs
This aint TNT but my verse just made this battle line the Closer
Only way you gone elevate high enuff if you get close to a Overdoser
v/c wrighter