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Thread: Last Verse

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    Last Verse

    lol, dont close it chill! smile man, its just a little poem, is no harm to anybody- ur like the people that banned weed-

    i mean, close it if you want, i wont re-post it- just... try not to, its my last verse man, so many people on these boards piss me off, i dont enjoy it u know, i need a better outlet.. just let me say goodbye? i send loads of people to this link, new members etc, play cool play cool!

    Seeya, read this one! - the mindstates kickin
    The face scars fit-him. the spacebar's sticking
    the victim is karma itself; harmful to health
    stealth-cancer, the answer is a partner to wealth-
    sell a little sigh of composure, sign of a closure
    on a horizon plagued with costant exposure
    deaths never over... the ghost said shes deep in his head
    ...just another pretty girl who was dead- if thoughts bled.
    half the facts with double the pep, a troubling step
    but something about boris is un-read... his head.
    new sig to greet-you, stuck with the emus
    FUCKIN PISSED at the lack of reviews. emphatic abuse
    the static is like diesil per litre, oh yee-ah!
    whilst the feedback makes a case for korea... so... see-ya
    untitled still, rival kill, its all about meat-stocks
    til greed-stops. men in tree-tops snipe for Reeboks
    still a 'few will reach this juncture' type assumption
    facilitating destruction. irritating introduction
    corruptions rudimentary, no luck if the sync goes
    and eventually the system implodes. resisting supposed.
    ..logistics in codes, the zero is a numbers game
    but so's the mathamatics man, the funds insane! stunned again
    under trained! lame. lol samari-sword with it
    so re-read until your bored with it. i think the Lord did it!?

    lol, was cool to read your stuff peeps and couple of peepettes, words are beautiful things... ha ciao
    Last edited by Boris Funk; June 11th, 2006 at 09:11 PM

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    You need links bucko. But I guess I'll leave feed before someone closes it. To start, you have LedgenZ style definitly. Not legends, as in legends material, but the member LedgenZ. It's good that you're a topical writer that doesnt have to have his pieces end with bloodshed, death, suicide, or depression. You're a good writer, just keep it up and you'll be up there soon. Piece.
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    what is a topical writer? i did a piece with ledgendz, was really hot man - check it out

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