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done.uppin
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absolutley stunning i loved that idea imagrey content wordplay... creativity
everything was their u made me want to read more and even made me laugh... props hommie keep writing!!
10/10
thanks dude
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i thought this piece was ill......beautiful imagery.....vocab was pretty dope...it wasnt the most complex but it worked for this peice perfectly....your rhyme scheme i personaly liked...it had its funny parts.....nice multis..you stayed on point mos def...i dug this piece mos def...keep droppin and elevatin~1~
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wow.....this was something for real....this was real Dope.
flowed excellently...the concept was awsome..interesting.
Rhymes and imagery were dope throughout......
I followed this whole peice and i was feeling everybit of it
nice creativity and vocab usage here and there...
overall this was dope. keep it up...
Your one sick guy, you know that right?.. Even if this was a piece, it was weird as hell. I mean, I really cant think of anything to say instead of "wtf?". Anyways, dissreguarding the concept, you had an ok imagenary. Nice flow for the most part, but could get choppy at times. I actually hope you can make some more OM's with sain concepts. Keep writing, and good job.. pz
dude sane just isn't my style.......if I am going to be branded as 'sick',then so be it
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fuck off your whack.Originally Posted by Catastrophe
bump
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lmao this shit was fucking great one of the best pieces ive read in ages well done. good imagery man keep it up peace
RIP BIG L
thanks dude
feel free to nominate it lol
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