-Lyric- vs Percept

[($topical heat$)]

percept came out on top this time with better structure wordplay punches and mostly personalz it was a better verse but i have seen u do better


lyric u had ok verse some personalz not very many punches some wordplay but good structure work on yoiur punches personalz and wordplay and ull do fine

so my vote goes to percept ly ric work on those what i told u and ull win a lot thats what i did so gl to u both

[Soul Shocker]

This was a very easy battle to vote on.Percept had the better verse by a long shot.He HAD personals and his punches hit harder.His structure was also much better.No hate

v//Percept

[BC]

Percept

snap you like a twig, ya cant fathom my essence, ull neva make it big
you aint popular, notice how no one but you is quoting you in ya sig

this is a ok start

You awkward. And ya girlfriend? She jock me at bars
I mean… She got a community chest like some monopoly cards

this is nice

Im #1. Against the odds? U’ll need a miracle to hang & win
Ill have you writin PS 2 GOD like you was an online gaming king

ok

You and I? We have lives. But you’d trade yours to be me.
Id say ‘channel ya thoughts’, but who wants more gay porn on tv?

ok

10-12 lines..... WTF? we aint in math, kid
Since you must like math…
I closed my book on ya head…

not bad

and left ya ‘face in fractions’
Plus ya impotent, hoping to get some pussy, but aint really
You just wishin on a broken bone…........... like Thanksgiving
nice ending

Lyric

I'm bout to bombard this kid wit so bad, it'll feel like percipitation
your such an obliteration to rap, its beyond utmost imagination*

good start

Percept is taken, a loss, its true I'm sorry I don't mean to boast
but this kid's verses are so weak, hes got more losses than posts

i dont understand this one

he tells noobs hes wack to get an easy win, man you can't get lower
he knows its true,in rappin hes more useless the a bladeless lawn mower

fuck, good shit

well this battles already over, and beleive me thats not a a Perception
man this kids such a nobody, on his personality test, hes guessin

silly

can't you read? I asked to battle battle only DOPE people in my thread
cause believe me once I post my verse I'll have you seein read**

its pretty close but lyric won this Next time...V/percept if i could hae understood that one punch it would have made a difference

[Percept]

poll ya vote homie

[KZK]

this was weak , u need more personals on both sides ,
percept- ur closure was horrible and ur opener was decent , u have good vocab , but ur flow is choppy u gotta make everything connect , and dont use played lines

lyric-great flo , but it seemed more like a freestyle then a battle , u didnt have any solid punches or personals , try not explaining everything about ur verse at the bottom of the post , if u kno ur verse is good then u dont have to explain,u didnt hit as hard as percept

vt/percept for above reasonts

plez vote on ma battle fairly
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...84#post3658684

[KZK]

sorry i forgot to poll so im doin it now but go vote fairly in ma battle