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Thread: Death Poem by me

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    Cool Death Poem by me

    Death

    as I raise it to my eyes
    its gleam makes me squint
    I’ve been living with these lies
    the ones people make up about me
    I cant take it no more
    why don’t they just let me be
    what a joke they wont ever quit
    its for their own entertainment
    everyday at recess and lunch im alone when I sit
    no one wants to get to know me
    and its all because of them
    don’t the realize how much it hurts cant they see
    so now I sit here with the knife in my hand
    knowing that the pain I feel inside will continue
    this time I will do it properly and leave this cruel land
    I press it against my wrist and blood appears
    I start to feel light headed
    running down my cheeks are tears
    I want to let my mum know I love her so much
    but I cant take this anymore
    my eyes start to close and I loose my sense of touch
    I’m now on my last breath
    my heart beats this once more
    this is the end, this is my death

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    post sum commentz or suttin 2 me on wot u think .. laterz

    * uppin for honest feedback n constructive criticism *
    Last edited by TeArZ_Of_SoRRow; December 19th, 2005 at 12:17 PM

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