Backfire vs. Lyricz

[~Lyricz~]

Uppin For Votez Still............................................. ...................................

[BackFire]

uppin close please i'll return da favor

[noncha1ant]

~Lyricz~
in dis battle im not gonna get beat by a fag//
but if i do it must be dat he has votes from his dickridin fam//
lol funny
him battlin me is like battlin da reaper of his life//
well dis dumbass could of killed me if he stabbed me wit da right end of his knife//
lol
ur disses are as weak as you//
and dat aint a good sight cos u act a tough attitude//
[b/wttfff[/b]
dis dude walks around like he'z da boss of da military//
but he aint,he'z more like da secretary//(cant spell?? can i?)
noooooooooooo
so now go and fetch me a coffin and a shuvel//
i gonna put u to sleep to end ur troubles//
no!

BackFire

i'll kill dis dude he'll end up in a body bag
and ur rhymes is like a ball sac ur shit jus sags
lololol funny
yous a small ass kid u run when u see candy
and u ejeculate in ur mind so u won't cum in hand'y
funny
don't glorify cause there is nothing great about u
cause out of dat 10 i only saw seven u missing a haiku
again funnny lol
i feel like nas when im eithering dis wack ass
plus ur like a un hooked bait u got no mass
nooo
i neva lose i kill all by my lonely boy u need help
and im the lyrical dictionary,ur picture book fell off da shelf
lol

obviously backfire came stronger in every category...

v/draw

[BackFire]

uppin i'll return da favor when i get 100 posts

[Lock-Down]

yo lyricz u got my vote ur punchne was way better

[Lock-Down]

lyricz won ths battle he had better punchlines

[BackFire]

yo Lockdown i know u mad cause i voted against u so i don't give a fuck u didn't even explain

[SLiM 12 ThUg]

i'll kill dis dude he'll end up in a body bag
and ur rhymes is like a ball sac ur shit jus sags
yous a small ass kid u run when u see candy
and u ejeculate in ur mind so u won't cum in hand'y
don't glorify cause there is nothing great about u
cause out of dat 10 i only saw seven u missing a haiku
i feel like nas when im eithering dis wack ass
plus u like an unhooked bait u hold no mass
i neva lose i kill all by my lonely boy u need help
and im the lyrical dictionary,ur picture book fell off da shelf


i liked this verse cause all of his lines ryhmed and his flow was perfect......just work on ectendin it a little


vs


in dis battle im not gonna get beat by a fag//
but if i do it must be dat he has votes from his dickridin fam//

him battlin me is like battlin da reaper of his life//
well dis dumbass could of killed me if he stabbed me wit da right end of his knife//

ur disses are as weak as you//
and dat aint a good sight cos u act a tough attitude//

dis dude walks around like he'z da boss of da military//
but he aint,he'z more like da secretary//(cant spell?? can i?)

so now go and fetch me a coffin and a shuvel//
i gonna put u to sleep to end ur troubles//

i dont think he had tha srtogesst punchline......he couldve done better....ur flow was a lil off....mayb next time bro

[wyte boy$]

back fire won wit beta lyrics andd strructure..........both need to wwork on ur wordplay................andd punches.........but overall back fire won......
v/back fire (beta lyrics)
no hate (please vote on my battle below fairly thannks....)

[F5]

back fire-ok verse with some decent punches
u came hareder punchwise and that earned u the win. theres still alot of room to elevate thou.

lyrics-ok verse, not as good punchwise,
this cost u, everythin else was pretty much even

yall both need to work on structure, harder punches and incorparatin rhymes throu out all of it

vote-backfire for reasons above

[J-Jay]

~Lyricz~
in dis battle im not gonna get beat by a fag//
but if i do it must be dat he has votes from his dickridin fam//
<<lol funny>>
him battlin me is like battlin da reaper of his life//
well dis dumbass could of killed me if he stabbed me wit da right end of his knife//
<<lol>>
ur disses are as weak as you//
and dat aint a good sight cos u act a tough attitude//
<<wttfff>>
dis dude walks around like he'z da boss of da military//
but he aint,he'z more like da secretary//(cant spell?? can i?)
<<noooooooooooo>>
so now go and fetch me a coffin and a shuvel//
i gonna put u to sleep to end ur troubles//
<<no!>>

BackFire

i'll kill dis dude he'll end up in a body bag
and ur rhymes is like a ball sac ur shit jus sags
<<lololol funny>>
yous a small ass kid u run when u see candy
and u ejeculate in ur mind so u won't cum in hand'y
<<funny>>
don't glorify cause there is nothing great about u
cause out of dat 10 i only saw seven u missing a haiku
<<again funnny lol>>
i feel like nas when im eithering dis wack ass
plus ur like a un hooked bait u got no mass
<<nooo>>
i neva lose i kill all by my lonely boy u need help
and im the lyrical dictionary,ur picture book fell off da shelf
<<lol>>

i feel that back fire came harder in this battle even though it was an overall weak battle both ya'll needa work on punches they aint hittin hard enough but like i said back gets my vote

V/B

yo black poll your vote home and lyrics hit this with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=223721

[ak-mixa]

dis was a weak battle but backfire had more punches and a betta flow and at least he didn't have dat annoying // shit.......cause its not coo.........lyricz needs to elevate and try and get betta cause he needs to and so does backfire....but not bad....backfire jus came a lil harder in my opinion.

vote- backfire

vote on ma battle here fairly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=225904