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Thread: No More Tender Months In Spring

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    Par-War
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    No More Tender Months In Spring

    Romancing flames have burnt out with Winter's change
    In the center of me though, still a flicker remains
    A dim glimmer, upon a shimmering golden wick sustains
    Well lit to burn through eternity, when the wax is malaise
    Intact with my passion my senses have let go of the mundane
    Now all that exist to me, are the reminiscent memories I've claimed
    Love, i have never and will never shun, or turn my head away
    Even if Eden is without it and the heavens give it no praise
    So i refrain from the rest, until i find a felicity in life
    Until love wilts like rose petals and its stem tilts and alights
    And returns to the dirt, with dust and cuddled roots alike
    Until i meet it there in death, beneath ebony soil and oak blight
    Deep infatuation has taken me and to it i am a slave
    My chains of lust bind me to never forget my lovers name
    And forever i am hers, forever i shall retain
    The stale love that used to blossom, in the tender months of spring

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    DECENT liked the rhyme scheme and play on words next time post a poll

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    uppin for feedback in here

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