Poetry battle
12-16Lines
Topic:My Hood(explain ur hood as specific as u can)
20Minutes after u say check
Blind Spit
Good Luck
Poetry battle
12-16Lines
Topic:My Hood(explain ur hood as specific as u can)
20Minutes after u say check
Blind Spit
Good Luck
*The Original.*
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this is my check in man yeah lets get it going good luck this is a hot idea
Da Burg(In these Streets)
Drug Dealers and Life Stealers(Guns) rule the streets with Chin-Chila...
Cuz here u either die or do sports in these streets...
We all wanna eat, but the food is limited in these streets...
So we turn on the furnace, and watch BET in these streets...
If u sellin its obvious ur lifes good for the moment in these streets...
So bein rich for a second then stripped clean and butt naked in these streets...
The "Po" would love to see the blacks dead and poor in these streets...
I cry tears cuz mom dukes aint alive in these streets...
Lil Kids no socks nor shoes tryna survive in these streets...
Why cant i just escape, wat a fuckin disgrace in these streets...
My mind filled with anger and strife...my life in these streets...
Turned me cold-hearted, my mind set on money in these streets...
When i turn the corner...leavin fagts dead in these streets...
Tryna eat off my beats, cant face defeat in these streets...
Iam counted on by my brothers, i cant end up like my mother...in these streets
*The Original.*
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When I go home I don't want to hear gunshots thats if I get home.......
Can I be fresh........Blue jeans with a white tee underneath blazer on top......
People selling bootlegs 5 dollars a pop........
People call this place the ghetto with the open fields and no grass.........
Watch where you stepping cause if you ain't got shoes on...........
You will cut your feet from the broken beer bottles and glass.......
I'm recruited by local druglords in the mist of it all...........
Temptation follows me everywhere I go they offer me insurance and all........
I want a better life for me and my family but not if it means getting killed..
If I got to sell my soul then I think I rather be in debt ......
To society MY prorities Are well in checked.....
In a blink of a eye everything is a blurr....
You blind by the frequent smoking and chilling on the curb..........
Boys grabbing the genitals screaming out thats my word..............
Beggars and drunken bastard breathing their last breath........
Helping my friends fuck that I got enough problems looking out for myself.......
no matter who wins tough cuz we did start sumethin and this was fun as shit for me to get that out there u know...big up ...mad props to whoever fam cuz its all good...
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felonies verse was tight i could see what he was sayin
J-Doe had the same rhyme to much and i didnt like that
v=felonies
Infamousfelonies, i liked that. that was crazy and your verse seemed more complex to me. it was tight, i felt what u was saying.
j-doe- yours was ok, need better wording, make it seem more realistic so when people read it they will say wow. just be more creativive.
v/Infamousfelonies
yo infamous won dat shyt nice verse n j doe i liked ur shyt to nice rhymin but ima give da vote to infamous
Infamousfelonies
good fucking verse nigga i like ya punches and ya wordplay
J-Doe man it was iight but you have to throw it harder next time wit ya punches but ya word play was tight i like dat
no hote but my vote goes to Infamousfelonies
man infamousfelonies your shit seemed a lot like the situation i'm in and j doe your shit just didn't click in my mind i could see what infamous felonies was talkin bout that shit goes to infamousfelonies
uppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnn this thing for voooooooteeeeeeees
Da Burg(In these Streets)
Drug Dealers and Life Stealers(Guns) rule the streets with Chin-Chila...
Cuz here u either die or do sports in these streets...
We all wanna eat, but the food is limited in these streets...
So we turn on the furnace, and watch BET in these streets...
If u sellin its obvious ur lifes good for the moment in these streets...
So bein rich for a second then stripped clean and butt naked in these streets...
The "Po" would love to see the blacks dead and poor in these streets...
I cry tears cuz mom dukes aint alive in these streets...
Lil Kids no socks nor shoes tryna survive in these streets...
Why cant i just escape, wat a fuckin disgrace in these streets...
My mind filled with anger and strife...my life in these streets...
Turned me cold-hearted, my mind set on money in these streets...
When i turn the corner...leavin fagts dead in these streets...
Tryna eat off my beats, cant face defeat in these streets...
Iam counted on by my brothers, i cant end up like my mother...in these streets
vs
When I go home I don't want to hear gunshots thats if I get home.......
Can I be fresh........Blue jeans with a white tee underneath blazer on top......
People selling bootlegs 5 dollars a pop........
People call this place the ghetto with the open fields and no grass.........
Watch where you stepping cause if you ain't got shoes on...........
You will cut your feet from the broken beer bottles and glass.......
I'm recruited by local druglords in the mist of it all...........
Temptation follows me everywhere I go they offer me insurance and all........
I want a better life for me and my family but not if it means getting killed..
If I got to sell my soul then I think I rather be in debt ......
To society MY prorities Are well in checked.....
In a blink of a eye everything is a blurr....
You blind by the frequent smoking and chilling on the curb..........
Boys grabbing the genitals screaming out thats my word..............
Beggars and drunken bastard breathing their last breath........
Helping my friends fuck that I got enough problems looking out for myself.......
aight i gotta say both of ur verse were from da heart.....true situations....an i was feelin both of dem....but i was feelin more of j-does verse no hate
v/j doe
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ayo dat was a tight battle i wanna do dat shit nigga who want ta battle me in dat shit about our hood...but anyway i got more into felonies and i liked his strutcre and flow better but if niggaz wanna do dat shit hit me up and vote on my battles fairly if ya can......
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