no d/r
no h/v
no bitin
no recyclin
no ghostwriters
due in 30min
u spit first
checkin 3min
good luck
ghostly
-Lyrical~Mindz-
no d/r
no h/v
no bitin
no recyclin
no ghostwriters
due in 30min
u spit first
checkin 3min
good luck
Dead or Alive.
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ieght ill go kinda soft cuz yr new
ill take it as a practice to see what you can do
lyrical mindz is your name
and gettin yr ass wooped by me is your game
ill snatch your fame
and put you in a frame in the hall of shame
im to blame
oh ya in your girls bed i left the stain
ya by the way now that im done she can be fisted
sorry if my lyrics make you wanna slit your wrists kid
ya twisted
and like color in the white house you miss it
ill dish it
and as for my white ass you can kiss it
like jagged metal with out safty glasses
or gasoline and matches
your messin with a champ
and after this youll need a handicap ramp
smackedy wack wack
your fucked up head i smack
cant touch this mac
liek a thumb tack in the back
call yourself an MC
you couldnt bless a cd if it sneezed
when people want shit
your head gets squeezed
i burn you so bad you cry, cry, cry
ill give you this kid you got potenial.....
like NSYNC bye bye bye
nigga ur punches aint hurtin cuz u like casper da friendly ghost
u culd hav a custm title & stll hve no respect cuz das jus leavin posts
standin in an elevator is the only time u could've elevated
nigga ur lyrics are played and shitty it is pg rated
homie ur mind aint lyrically fit yet im ready for my next bout
livin in apartment buildinz for low rent ur ass still get kicked out
kid u couldnt beat me if i help u and swung the belt
all da punchin in da world ur punchlines still wont be felt
nigga u claimin u da best now itz time i put u to rest
fake ass emcee............left wide open ur chest...
for me to cave that shit in...u should've used ur blockerz
u couldnt punch faster if u froze time like clock stopperz
LOL @ dis nigga...i had fun in dis battle
Dead or Alive.
iight this was one long ass battle so i wont copy and past this shit but i will thorolly evaluate it
ghost~ u need to no that this site is not like a local battle or a school battle its the real deal ur lines were all basic and u had a weak flo and weak punches
u need lots of work no hate jus the truth
try to battle someone ur level 4/10
LM~
u had a strong consistant flo and good multis ...... ur structure stuck and it was pretty good... u need a vocab boost and some harder hits tho
8/10
vt/ LM
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iight this was one long ass battle so i wont copy and past this shit but i will thorolly evaluate it
ghost~ u need to no that this site is not like a local battle or a school battle its the real deal ur lines were all basic and u had a weak flo and weak punches
u need lots of work no hate jus the truth
try to battle someone ur level 4/10
LM~
u had a strong consistant flo and good multis ...... ur structure stuck and it was pretty good... u need a vocab boost and some harder hits tho
8/10
vt/ LM
iiight look ghostly you suck leave the site ya fuckin herb lol j/k but you do suck it was a horrific verse waste of time etc but you can still elevate everyonce can elevate if thety try and dont give up so keep on trying just work on ya verses for now on
lyrical eh it was iight didnt like it that much but was enuff to beat ghhots elevate dawgs on the real work on ya puinches and personals and anything you can on ther ereal elaveate
v/lm
ghostly-struture:it was wack.flow:it was wack.punches:none.vocabulary:was basic.
mindz-structurek.flow:iight.punches good.vocabulary:iight.
battle overall-i'll give this to lyrical cuz he had punches and his rhymes were good.ghostly just came at him too basic.
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ieght ill go kinda soft cuz yr new
ill take it as a practice to see what you can do
WACK
lyrical mindz is your name
and gettin yr ass wooped by me is your game
WACK
ill snatch your fame
and put you in a frame in the hall of shame
WACK
im to blame
oh ya in your girls bed i left the stain
IIGHT I GESS
ya by the way now that im done she can be fisted
sorry if my lyrics make you wanna slit your wrists kid
PLAYED
ya twisted
and like color in the white house you miss it
OK
ill dish it
and as for my white ass you can kiss it
WACK
like jagged metal with out safty glasses
or gasoline and matches
your messin with a champ
and after this youll need a handicap ramp
WACK
smackedy wack wack
your fucked up head i smack
WACK
cant touch this mac
liek a thumb tack in the back
WACK
call yourself an MC
you couldnt bless a cd if it sneezed
when people want shit
your head gets squeezed
i burn you so bad you cry, cry, cry
ill give you this kid you got potenial.....
like NSYNC bye bye bye
WACK
VS.
nigga ur punches aint hurtin cuz u like casper da friendly ghost
u culd hav a custm title & stll hve no respect cuz das jus leavin posts
IIGHT
standin in an elevator is the only time u could've elevated
nigga ur lyrics are played and shitty it is pg rated
PLAYED
homie ur mind aint lyrically fit yet im ready for my next bout
livin in apartment buildinz for low rent ur ass still get kicked out
IIGHT
kid u couldnt beat me if i help u and swung the belt
all da punchin in da world ur punchlines still wont be felt
IIGHT
nigga u claimin u da best now itz time i put u to rest
fake ass emcee............left wide open ur chest...
for me to cave that shit in...u should've used ur blockerz
u couldnt punch faster if u froze time like clock stopperz
IIGHT
V/LM BECUASE HE HAD BETTER STRUCTURE AND FLOW
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