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    So lonely and confused~ so into you~tell me what should I do
    I’m feelin used~ words construed~leavin my heart so weak and abused//

    absurd, slured by the terms I've used when you Inferred the truth
    Im concerned the youth will have to purge in too

    Did you lie or try to let things slide~can’t even look straight in my eyes
    Took things in stride~ seems my love and heart are suddenly denied//

    at time's I've constrived lies that I thrive to define to you're minds eye's
    while I tried to derive from twined lines In my prime time //

    U need to realize ur hurting me~open ur eyes more and face reality
    I can only hold on so long to the edge of a ledge before I’m falling free//

    I feel like i've derailed you see, casualities impound my mind with mortalities
    so how shall i Impale morality when my mentality's gone to frailty //

    So close back in the day ~I never strayed~it’s a wicked game u play
    Torn in two between love and tears always wonder should I go or stay//

    contained, still I've managed to maintain my ways while the situations change
    deranged by the way it remains the same, but we still make love the same way //

    Just wanting your attentions~love and affections~tired of passive aggression
    I love you baby boy….but this silence got me beggin and stressin//

    Im infested by the word's that i've kept ingested, shown you only minor attention
    left blind and suspended when my only mind's intentions strived convention //


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post2498134 Something me and my friend sketched up
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...42#post2498142

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    damn i loved reading this, excellent flow, great vocab, i felt your emotions..kinda had trouble reading the orange though

    absurd, slured by the terms I've used when you Inferred the truth
    Im concerned the youth will have to purge in too

    ^^my jaw dropped right there, i was feelin the rhythm

    keep up the great work

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    Two lines of feedback doesn't cut it here. Closed.
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