Stand Up (please read)

[Intermental]

thanks makeshyft

[KªL¡]

yea it could use some work, but you got the concept homie.
pretty good overall, just some spots seemed forced, or not enough.
but you got it homie, run w/ it, elevate some more 1

[RJSGN]

hey shit is betta than mine...haha naw i mean it was str8...the chorus is kinda played...but i like ur style its raw attitude of this nigga tryin 2 make it alone...pretty good...