Crescent Ocean

[Brian Amaya.]

Crescent Ocean

In the creamy light of the enigmatic stars and a silver moon,
I walk by the crescent ocean.
When my thoughts become obtuse and senses fold acutely,
I walk by the crescent ocean.
When my still peace is dead and my death is still peaceful,
I walk by the crescent ocean.
When I see your radiant image bathing in the bluest of waters,
I run by the crescent ocean.
As I run out of breath, trying to be closer to your pastel skin,
I stumble by the crescent ocean.
When a divine mirage disappears like warm breath in cold wind,
I stop by the crescent ocean.
When I feel like my tears are holding on too tight to my lashes,
I cry by the crescent ocean.
Because you traced your name on my heart in beautiful calligraphy,
I love by the crescent ocean.
As I suffocate, with a grin, from tears of joy and remembrance,
I reminisce by the crescent ocean.
When my love tripped over a sand dollar and fell into her amity,
I drowned in the crescent ocean.

I Love you.
Mi amor,
Tu eres mi vida.

[.verity.]

very interesting, for some reaosn i felt this passage more than any other peice ive read on this site so far. I think i can say that because the words and everything you had said brang back memories of my ex gf... so just for that... i give you mad props, lol. none the less, the concept behind this peice was great, i really enjoyed you expression... It seems you put passion into your words. I say that because of the last lines...

As I suffocate, with a grin, from tears of joy and remembrance,
I reminisce by the crescent ocean.
When my love tripped over a sand dollar and fell into her amity,
I drowned in the crescent ocean.

very emotional, and very meaningful. neways... Great drop keep em comin and maybe you could reply to my peace and return the favor...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...61#post2018861

neways keep droppin str8 heat, Peace...

[Brian Amaya.]

Thankyou.

[Brian Amaya.]

Up.

[Brian Amaya.]

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