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Thread: Crazy Shit.......My Subconscious, Dreams and Interpretations

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    Crazy Shit.......My Subconscious, Dreams and Interpretations

    Yo...

    I feel a force in my life that I can't describe/
    Constantly looking in the mirror deep into my eyes/
    Trying to find a way to fill this rather large vortex/
    Everytime my conscious ascends in my cerebral cortex/
    Out of the subconscious, where a para-reality exists/
    Undiscovered Nebulae and Galaxies with a dimensional twist/
    This world is not 3-demensional because there's a fourth/
    Time is the last dimension that plots your eternal course/
    In my subconsious I find memories and interpretations skewed/
    Dreaming in colors, and shapes not with the natural hue/
    Saturated in it's rich contents, I find myself picturing box-sets/
    Of DVD's with pornography, people snortin drugs ignorin prophets/
    The man that I see the light in the darkness, isn't Jesus The Christ/
    It's myself, my cons none of my pro's...no demons in sight/
    But still I wonder, how a man like me could achieve/
    A purified state with out departing this world I must leave/
    They say Heaven is a world with streets paved with gold/
    I disagree, for my Heaven is a place where both young and old/
    Can share in the same vision, good health...no surgical incisions/
    Decisions made are just ones, no more vehicular collisions/
    The sun never sets, there's no need for rest/
    No pain, no suffering...Poker where no one loses a bet/
    The english language doesn't include the word regrets/
    For no one regrets anything, no tears to reflect/
    The sun that's eternally shining, now and forever/
    Families together what vision is better?/
    Peace love and happiness is all I wish/
    In life, my dreams and subconscious world is missed/
    Every time I wake, I get the sense I'm losing touch/
    With this body made from ashes and dust/
    I feel the sensation that I'm some how rising/
    My threshold of happiness is the clouds, not the horizon/
    I feel a pain in my heart, but I know it's not physical/
    It's just a sign telling me not to believe my visuals/
    I'm a man, yes it's true...but my soul is not of this planet/
    Earth is merely a place where the human mind is stranded/
    Sleep is something that I find harder and harder to gain/
    The dreams I have, and interpretations are never the same/
    But one thing I know is a constant and it's true/
    There's no barrier my subconscious mind couldn't break through/

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    Feedback!!!!!...................

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    nice one...but u did use some words too often...the structure and everything was fine but try to find synonyms for the words ya usin....makes the quality of ur drops take an incline...pz fam
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