poem now deleted coz this site is shite
poem now deleted coz this site is shite
Last edited by The Vortex; January 4th, 2005 at 01:28 PM
uppin sum feed
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this was an above average piece, where you showed a good understanding of poetry. very talented all around. it caught my attention from the beginning to the end. the wording was great. probably 1 of the best reads in a long while.
are you cam...just wondering, cuz if i remember, he used to be vortex...
join po' ethics. lol.
anywho, nice job.
thanx for reading yo
nah i aint cam... so there was another vortex eh?
i've been going on another rap forum for a while
I'll look out for the Po'Ethics no doubt
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po' stop stealin our potential members...dammit franklin i told you to evaluate this...
anyway
check out divine diction, ill drop a reply in a few hours as im quite busy currently
Bittersweet
???????????uppin
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Nice job you had some really strong points in this piece and it was a decent read. You did the abab ryhme scheme right yeah that worked most of the time but nice job. Return the favor on hells decision.
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