free to the style

[milonelion]

i slap you with cornrolls, so you say his brain is tight
cut you in the neck, chew ya veins, that ain't right
but i'm gonna display my raps, to show they tight
words like granite, dynamite scared to explode it
mothafuckers jump they skin when i come to flow it
like show and tell, but i only tell it, i don't never show it
got over 60 posts, but no battles, cause i'm ill, you know it
bust raps like i bust a cherry into a girls lap
got mountains crumblin' and shit, like it's the world's rap
you know i'm ready, when i take and do one turn of the cap
hear my flow, and niggas talkin' about '' hit the sack ''
i leave you in a clear box, you can echo like you jack!
like gangs, i do the opposite of stack, i carjack
stack 'em up, and let 'em fall, i'm the illest of them all
fe fi fo fum, i'm a lyrical giant, watchin' niggas crawl

[Kill.]

i wouldnt say that your the illest but you definently good keep it up!

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[Endeva.]

not feeling this sort of thing, dont really like the flow, or what u are saying, it seems to be everywhere this sort of thing, get topical or osmething, some good twists to a story,, this just is too plain... keep at it tho

[milonelion]

wasn't feeling it myself.. i could do better, i was half-asleep. ;]

but go ahead and close it, it's not worth the effort. thanks