Introduction

[Goby]

Yo, check it...

Listen up little kids, on the streets the G's call me Goby
Its my first time on the net so you prolly don't know me
I've been hit up, bitch-cut, and kicked outta my own crib
So a life of spittin', dealin', and stealin' is now how I live
Ta give, is sumthing miraculous to me, not even an option
The whole neighborhood's hatin' so that includes adoption
My concoction of ill-willed kills and ink-filled quills has arrived
Evokin every emotion on paper cause my voice was deprived
The underdog of this country, I feel I'm rising with hope
I'm Holdin' the rope that choked those I used to know
But i'm different, unique, I see glory at the glance of a mirror
I've been through more death than war yet victory is nearer
In conclusion to my intrusion, this is my life's synopsis' trend
I've expressed my best impressions and now I'm lettin' it end


~Welcome Me With Open Arms~

[Goby]

just because im new, it doesn't mean that im bad. upping.

[Mistral]

This was alright I thought.....kinda short though, i thought it could have been a little longer.....the structure in this was pretty good.....the flow was good, it stayed on point through out the entire piece....content in this was ok...but keep at it.

[Goby]

thanks. uppin.

[Goby]

stop ignoring me cuz im new plz. thanx.
uppin.

[Goby]

yo peepz. hit me up wit sum feedback plz,
i'll gladly return the favor.

[TampaBoy]

yo i thought that was good,good content....just overall good spit....even though its not a battle it coulda used a few punches,but its pretty good.....by the way im new to this site also....but gimmie some feedback on what i dropped...its on "New Kat"

[Goby]

^thanx man. i'll hit that up for sure.

[TampaBoy]

you should checkout Mrlif.com fourms...im loved there

[Brother Blue Collar]

Decent post had good vocab feels like you really poured ya emotion in to it so that was good credz was right it was kinda short wish you posted more than it would have been nice as hell