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  1. #1
    J.Essen
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    Standing Up For Myself

    Superior Rebels Presents: Standing Up For Myself[/CENTER

    Bring it yo!
    I can take you on
    Bring it yo!
    Ill make your hopes long gone


    Sometimes I just have to stand up for myself,
    Im doing it for the own good of my health,
    Keeping low wherever I go being stealth,
    Yet sometimes I get knocked down,
    But my self-esteem is making it worth half crown,
    For when I face everyone I will be the talk of town,
    I will be feared from everyone around that surounds,
    Having to chase my oppenents in a run-down,
    My true strength and weaknesses are being profound,
    If someone trys to bop me they will end up with a lose,
    Cuz when you test me you will be physically abused,
    Dont try to get my brain cuz I refuse to be confused,
    My killin record is prettier then pretty boy Tom Cruise.



    Bring it yo!
    Taking em on one by one
    Bring it yo!
    You think it has ended but it just begun
    Bring it yo!
    You will be scrawled on the floor before Im done



    Still grindin with all the kills on my belt,
    I keep thinking of what the vics might have felt,
    As I keep moving on with great svelte,
    But I dont care anymore they already gone,
    Im becoming known `round world like Sean John,
    People know my name and they say it with caution,
    Rippin every dude that come to me from Cali to Boston,
    15,000,000 miles I will cross to get to the top,
    Doin this for rap and hip hop and I will not stop,
    I keep building up like a farmer`s root crop,
    Everyone askin what imma do next,
    Im more of an Open Mic but I still to text,
    Even scientists dont know what I am cuz Im complex,
    Sinkin your hopes and dreams like ship wrecks.



    Bring it yo!
    Still doing my thing
    Bring it yo!
    After all this Ill be king
    Bring it yo!
    Distracting you like a zing



    Im gonna tell you one more time,
    More people wanna see me then an Eminem Concert Line,
    This aint gonna happen but if I fail Ill be like a sublime,
    Every time I come I make my heart and soul shine,
    Still going, Still rowing,Still showing, Still knowing,
    Still flowing, Still blowing,Rhymes Still glowing,Still throwing,
    But I can do that without even knowing bout what Im doing,
    Still doing, Still brewing, Still chewing, Still pursuing, Still stewing,
    Still reviewing, But in all this time I know I am the best,
    For all that I have done I must have been blessed,
    Everyone that knows me gets impressed,
    That doesnt matter nevertheless,
    I suggest arrest against this depressed jest.



    Bring it yo!
    Completed my goal
    Bring it yo!
    I have more people watching then the Super Bowl
    Bring it yo!
    Im on champion patrol




    Peace Yo,

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    wow, very good piece man, the flow was exelent all the way through, style used was also good, keep up this. 8/10

    can ya return the favour, thanks.
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  3. #3
    -Smoke-
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    good peice...i liked the structure...
    everything was good...the wordplay etc...
    the hook concept was good...

    good peice overall...keep spittin...

    return the favor...check the battle in my sig...

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    you are getting better and better...this was actually pretty decent..simple in a way..but still decent..your flow was okay and your structure was decent..keep up..peace..

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