nice drop, multis, flow, vocab were all there, uhh not much more i can say, good lines, though the ending wasnt that cheesey
nice drop, multis, flow, vocab were all there, uhh not much more i can say, good lines, though the ending wasnt that cheesey
Scytsophrenia
Flowed good this piece, .. nice immagery, ..vocab wa son pint were it needed, to be..enjoyed this read, .. keep it up man -= )
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- Artificial Intelligence
man what can I say liked this a lot, nice piece it's the first one I read from you
very very nice..nothing seemed forced or overused...I didnt find any flaws so
I can't go on writing much longer..but I did enjoy..Props
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
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