WK 5: Bahriman Vs Zunto - Z wins

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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Bahriman @Zunto

[Zunto]

Check

[Bahriman]

Smh check

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@Bahriman @Zunto
Bars due tonight

[Zunto]

The glock long, smoke in the air thought it was a pop song
..I’m connecting rounds until it becomes a body like Oblongs

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Bah’s Bar…



Your wife Susan tries to cheat, that dick ain’t makin ho proud
But no 1 will fuck Zebu, cos she the size of one of those cows

[Baron Mynd]

WAY GONE @ OBLONGS

presume he meant cylinders or was trolling but w/e either way

I got Bahriman this week

[Barcotic]

One letter nameflips are shit
Theyve allll been done
+ nobody calls him Z
One letter np only works on guys with a names like MV

Then again i also hate when guys use the word rounds as the word circles
Like
Would you roll up on the guy drawing oblongs and say "hey there! i see youre drawing rounds"
No, you wouldnt
Drawing circles maybe, but not rounds. It doesnt make sense grammatically
THAT SAID, you had a much better concept attempt and tie-ins than bahrim did
Wording too

Vgt zunto

[MV]

I can't entirely agree my pink-cheeked brother. one letter name flips can indeed be fun and deliberate and fresh. despite my argument, Bahris punch felt rushed. another spin on the world play zebu might have done it for me. so its the Oblong punch for me .
v/Zunto

[Ryno]

Oblongs was kinda cool. Zebu works but seems like a reach

V/Zunto

[Blue Bayou]

Vote Bahriman was hoping to see onomatopoeia

[Pharaohs Army]

Got Zunto here
BUT ITS CLOSE
I friggn love his opening line (and as I journaled2 him had one very similar brewing on my stove). hheheh...
THAT SAID I don't love the oblong werdplay - whatevr that is.
But his bar is more phonetic fire than his opponent's for suuure... and I'm just gonna roll with that
I DO like the personal diss of his opponent's woman and fat cow wordplay... I Do like it that's why it's so close.
Just seems Zelph here appealed a bit more to my English professor side. Whereas Bahr was sligghtly more simple/smaller werdz.

Thanks to both for dropping and GL next week~

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Z Wins