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    cherry pie

    I am a cherry pie, in the morn.. the drew drops forming
    sure as sure can be when yawning while fawning
    hard core exploring before loitering on lawn each storm hits
    bored between bordem and forwarning

    The Law of the land is as fat and word lore untorn
    in a new years wish of before yours i support but to inform you i am poor
    nah i am norse - itself
    off the shelf

    TOP SHELF infact - splat
    trying to make an impact in the cement jungle where only the wild roses
    SCAT-TAR..altar that farther further down the line maybe SHAT-ER
    holy moses

    did you know most people die alone from over self exposure and its aroma
    no sir not this
    kitty kat riff raff missmatch hybrid still in bed
    with her bed hair..

    this is just the morning news..
    the over thrown vomit bucket sitting near my blue swayed shoes
    the buckle that sits on them new - new but bruised

    like a vashion victim suckling the threaded section waiting to be called consumption

    assuming

    I am here to report
    ..

    DAY one
    on the moon us

    This nazi camp smells like rotten tomatoes
    a potato gun and all the mother missmatched out her halo - sun
    son
    to be or not to be
    as pluto ressurects each cosmic dust cloud
    the wolfs planets defour the virginity of the merucrys rub down
    venus golden then blue
    the evening news new label is espn - if you use old spice mixed with brute

    the triffin is low.. the total recall of being labotimized named..

    Denis Quad comes over the screen
    "the devil is in the details, and the stage is set"
    "This is our new favourite holiday melanea available in the streets..
    stepped on, stepped on but yet oh so discreet..
    wet like uncut heroin caressed each set to the shower"

    waiting breaking breaking news in breaking news - weeeee have just been hit by a metor shower......
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    Re: cherry pie

    Greetings (again) Cereal...
    Do you have any audio recordings?

    Really thought that "tricky"Profetesa youtube beat I linked (on other site) really worked well for my verse AND YOURS ARGUABLY EVEN MORE...

    Mill goin' so hard here it's hard to "imagine/mentally" hear your bars here...
    thus the initial question up top ^
    =============================
    anyway, this is fire, but as u kno i'm biased....
    let's look at some of the many quotables:

    did you know most people die alone from over self exposure and its aroma

    Awesome...I'd like you to place a '?' either at the beginning or end of the line just for the reader, (on that first take esp.) so they know it's tone...

    this is just the morning news..
    the over thrown vomit bucket sitting near my blue swayed shoes

    casual, slightly self-depecrating FIRE

    like a vashion victim suckling the threaded section waiting to be called consumption

    In the words of Edward Norton in Primal Fear: "it was like we were dancing, Marty"...lol.
    This line holds a special place in my heart...I think we can all infer why

    the evening news new label is espn - if you use old spice mixed with brute

    lol, phonetic fire, after prev. line ended "blue"

    the triffin is low.. the total recall of being labotimized named..
    And again. Tbh I am not sure what the triffin term is, but still love the line...

    There are other quotables, but these are the big ones.
    Thanks for being a big boy as I critiqued you...you've (along w/ your own inititive and PRACTICE) vastly improved.
    to the point where i have to consume

    Keep exploring the boundaries of phraseology & phonetics...abstract imagery & try to pack your next one FULL of it,..
    That is already what you're doing but, as you are still improving, look to do it on sterioids and pack a big punch (again)...

    MINOR mispellings (some intentional)...like is it really necessary to spell "meteor" "metor"....is it some Aussie/British prounounce-cheat? I am a big culprit of purposeful misspellings, but I ONLY do it when I think it helps the reading.

    Stay up...
    Talk to you in like... less than 24 hours.~
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    Re: cherry pie

    i got a music page
    https://soundcloud.com/aaron-batty-951093780
    but i dont do recordings anymore..

    thanks for the reply ish was dope as all hell my maine man keep beeing cool lots of love
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    Last edited by Candy; April 3rd, 2023 at 11:21 PM
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    Re: cherry pie

    That was ironic… I didn’t read this ish yet but jungle some real shit. A spell I tried when I was delirious but Besides Candy I know better than to click your links even though I wanna study.

    This was really good and I’m impressed - I hope the best coke of it for you!

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    Yeah the psychic said about 2 more weeks of this double typing

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    Come of it*
    +~+~+~+~+~+~+~+~+~Ľ~+
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    OMG thanks 4 all those linkz man....
    Im only on the 2-4TH ONE....AND ITS GREAT,
    I ddint even know u had posted Disciple...
    I[;m so paranoida nd tired caffeined out...bipolar...weeeeeeded..gummied...no smoke tonight oh wait black nmilds SO many just enjoy 2 diff flavors till i die 4ever..on an alligator pole-dancing instigitaor, withatt00s and peirce and paitn on 'er backsyde

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    UPdate and or edit
    ok one more (b4 938 in the morn)
    get to bed discipe..afternoon cer.. 1- 3 more here, ever,,,4evvvr
    no sweater
    "(i sad b4?) she GETS no necklace btu she gets a baby
    (frommm her cufrent BF...wtehr or not she's ready??
    Oh yeah itsalicz.
    Itgs fine...shes a good mother in time unlike no wonder shye rimes for a living.
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    Last edited by Candy; March 23rd, 2023 at 04:04 PM
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    here’s my personal life
    don’t hurt me w/ words likea knife
    ask a seamstress about tha “threaded section” [lol]
    head infected bt idgaf\ hope u GEt that msg
    ain’t no drama here – never stresson
    but i carry that.. GLOCK,, for proteCtion
    ,other Gunz-i-won’t mention
    keep ‘um Locked intha “cahb-nit”
    ,i’m Hot|U-try-ta ma-nage
    ~


    t.b.c.
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    who are you? [echo] [echo] [echo...]


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    Re: cherry pie

    dvd watched liste
    ..

    the simpson movie
    looking for alibrandi
    tesla
    masters of the universe
    universe soldier
    me, myself & irene
    loaded weapon 1
    real cancun
    mulan
    aladdin - people
    wuthering heights
    social network
    the swan princess
    basket case
    wonder woman animation
    wonder woman
    con air
    a beautiful day in the neighborhood
    care bears 12
    carer bears the movie
    bad boys
    barbie and the pauper
    idependence day
    beauty and the beast
    white man cant jump
    sucker punch
    tangled
    gang related
    paddington
    paddington tv show
    life as a house
    the princess bride
    hercules
    spirited away
    how to train a dragon
    power rangers samurai - the team unites
    megan
    human traffic
    a royal family
    the royal jewels
    the limehouse golem
    citizin kane
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    here's my best found Evanescence remix for you
    (harder tho)

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