Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
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@Baron Mynd @Fitzgerald
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Baron Mynd @Fitzgerald
ready when you are
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this man claims he a poon hound.. and we all buy homies lies
its why im so surprised- when i found out hes a fag it was mind blowing, guys!
You’re trash w/ bars, multies can only carry your dumb ass so far
ur wack retard. if Fitz perfect.. I’m an 8XL t-shirt, hand me downs & Robranda’s bras
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Vote - Baron, I enjoyed the punch comicial finish good sting factor
On the NP, Fitz not to bad it wasn’t a bad punch just imo I think the concept is
REALLY Played out makes sense?
I've got V/ Baron/Lars here, with a "less bad" attempt, tbh.
Not feeling the heat/fire from either of these competitors on this week's drop, if I'm comparison hopping 1-2s...
[perhaps I'm hypocritical w/ my own lazy closer this wk...
moving on,]
Fitz:
Positives - really cool audio-style executable multi's (I Do like that shit, your punch here has got that (in-a-good-way) Shady-style rhyme delivery)...
Negatives - but in some cases [here] it's just a huge trade-off w/ simplicity/lack of originality... If you're gonna beat Lars the "omg he's gay",guys, closer HAS to be a little more original/fresh/spun...something. more.
Not terrible, but I bet/kno u have better in u.
Baron/Lars:
Positives - really like the opener...the first 1.5/2 lines frankly are good. Simple, but tightly worded writing-skill-diss mutlies...could argue for u to maybe add an "a" to "ur wack retard", for 1 quick extra syllable&readability, but that's just personal pharaoh flow tip from northeastern USA...you kno ur own shit so i assume u don't want the "a"...BUT
Negatives - And yes I'm biased cuz I been on netcees since '14, but...eh just kinda think a playyyed, simple robranda wordplay reference...I LIKE the "fitz perfect" wordplay, but not the finale of the robranda material...Sorry biased here, but that part just doesn't HIT like the end should; after a good start...
But your opponent had even more played closer so,
That's why the vote here...
But GL to both next week... and realize the harsher feed is to encourage - not disparage
Both decent, Fitz bar was pretty joke & flowed nicely. Baron's closer was a bit drawn out but otherwise it was fairly even. Baron's bar was tailored to Fitz which swung it for me.
Vote Baron Mynd
It could be an accent thing. Bras and far doesn’t rhyme well for me. I think that was the only knock I had about Barons. Other than that the concept was pretty cool. Didn’t have any issues w/ Fitz. Thought it was all around good.
V/Fitz
lol I got fitz here with the humor factor.. baron wasnt bad either but i didnt like the way he executed the bar
v . fitz
v/Baron
Fitz bar was nice and well worded but i have to go with the nm/personal. it just makes for an all around stronger punch. unless baron is actually gay. if so i will change my vote
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v/Baron
pretty easy tbh. I feel like this was Fitz first battle and he/she haven't looked at ANY battles or read any other verses before. Not much else to say here.
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